Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 119: Malibu Christmas
Little Justin certainly know what he wants ! Soon, the wonderful world of Egyptian palaces, slaves... There should be lots of themes in this hotel to satisfy all gay fantasies… mmmhh… ;)
Linds is going to screw up again and irritate Brian. Maybe not the idea of the century. She was a hair’s breath to go to jail but that didn’t teach her the lesson.
He, he... Justin is still himself. He wants fly and knows how to obtain what he wants...
Too cool
Big Love
Author's Response: Everyone is excited about the island. Linds is not thinking straight. Justin always did get what he wanted with one exception: Brian didn't agree with another child. Big love back!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2009 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 119: Malibu Christmas
I love the 'Christmas morning alarm clock’. I’ve the same here and in a few years I'll have even another (Maïalen like a Bis Repetita)
Linds is impossible. She ‘s going to ruin the chance she had to have moments with Gus. It's incredible. I hope her parents will make her see sense because if not, she’s heading for disaster... I love the way Justin uses his charms to obtain the agreement of Brian for flying lessons
Very good work as always
All my love
Author's Response: I think all kids love to wake up their parents if allowed to. Gus will stop his mother's rant in no time. Thanks Ihintza for your lovely review
Love back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 119: Malibu Christmas
Love the story.
Brilliant twist Mr Hamster.
Hugs.
Author's Response: Thank you complicated for commenting. Hugs back!
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 119: Malibu Christmas
Slave Justin would think of that. Love the flying idea.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 119: Malibu Christmas
I think it is time for Lindsay to have a reality check. She seems to be loosing it again, living in a world that makes her think she could get visitation rights.
Gus will probably have to put her in her place and set the boundaries. He will have to be the adult in the situation and tell her what he will allow.
Author's Response: You are so right. It was, is, and will always be about what Gus wants; not Lindsay. Thanks Eileen for commenting.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 119: Malibu Christmas
A very special Christmas (even if there was no snow) starting with the human alarm clock. That brings back yet more fond memories. *g*
I like the Egypt theme for the upper class resort, of course Slave Justin came up with this, LOL! The huts could have different themes too for a different flavor. Or maybe set each one up as a different fantasy room (S/M dungeon, pirate ship, victorian, caveman) that could be reserved for a few hours at a time...or not. LOL It's just fun thinking of all the possibilities! But I definitely agree with them having a private house/beach for their family use.
Then we have Linds. Somehow I knew she wouldn't be satisfied (it's always been about her...manipulative, spoiled wench that she is). Kind of funny that she feels thwarted by 'the mighty BK', is she over her fixation with him or is it because she is not getting his attention that she is doing this? I hope her parents put their collective feet down, because I don't think she'd have a roof over her head or money to hire a lawyer if they didn't support her. Well, I guess she can try, but I can't imagine a good lawyer would take her on with her history (and just thinking about that lawyer being confronted with Mel, and B/J makes me smile).
Mark and J, pilots. Life imitating art...Mark was the pilot in the Camaro commercial and it was J's concept. At least they can rack up a lot of qualifying air hours by flying between CA and Pitts. *g*
Another goody! Looking forward to the next...
Author's Response: I'm always honored with someone takes the time to give such a detailed review showing their interest in the story. I love your hut ideas for different themes; don't be surprised to see it added later. Years ago I was a pilot myself (single engine prop. planes only) and I like to write about it; it's tons of fun but too expensive these days for me to fly. I'm getting tired but I might get one more chapter out tonight if Mr. Hamster can stay on his wheel. Thanks so much for your great review cakdg.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 119: Malibu Christmas
I knew that lindsey wouldn´t keep her mouth shut.... grgrgr... :-)) rose
Author's Response: Every story must have the bad characters who could be good .. etc. Thanks rose!
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