Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 109: Boy’s Night Out

John is always so stupid (for Claire, there may be still hope). It’s a good thing Peter leaves this environment. First exit on the gay scene for the young generation. With such chaperons, this could only be fine. I remember my first time in our usual club with Otsoa, Tomas and my dads (yes, my dads) as chaperons. Inside, a special moment, a lot of invitations to dance, some caresses (nothing too serious) and a crowd of gay guys who felt they’d been entrusted with a mission of responsibility to me because I was the "little brother of" (and sometimes, it’s still the case). It was too great.

Super Chapter

Always a pleasure to read



Author's Response:

John is a typical macho homophobic prick teenager in America. We have way too many here. Remember this is the country that beat to death Matthew Sheppard tied to a fence. I sometimes wish I could leave it's so oppressive at times. The far right religious  groups rule the country and it makes for a bitter environment too often. I too was the youngest in my family and it has its advantages. You get away with so much crap being the youngest growing up.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 109: Boy’s Night Out

Haha! Loved John's jealous reaction to the news of where his brother is going to live now.  As B said a long time ago, the way to piss off straight people was to be a big fat fucking success.  Oh yeah!

I was suprised, but pleased, at Claire's grateful response when speaking with John, maybe there's hope for her relationship with Peter and B/J yet.

Glad all the boys had fun at Babylon and nice to remember the Vic Grassi house (I really miss Vic).

Another good one!  On to the next...



Author's Response:

That was a fun chapter to write. John is a piece of work for sure. Claire is having to reconsider her issues about gay people. I loved Vic too. Thanks for commenting cakdg.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 109: Boy’s Night Out

I just come back from shopping because tonight we have friends and neighbors and it’s Tapas’Night here

I don’t know why but I’ve a bad feeling with John... I just hope he won't attack his brother. He’s so mean. Apparently, the youth spent a great night in Babylon... I loved Mark and Brian always in PR mode. It was too funny... What a splendid idea this donation for the Vic Grassi House (Vic ah, that's a character I miss ....)

Superb chapter

A tons of kisses for you and Mr Hamster



Author's Response:

John will mostly only run his mouth and see very little of his younger brother now; perhaps only family gatherings which are rare. It was important for Peter to see he wasn't the only gay boy in the world. Kisses back! Thank you for commenting Ihintza.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 109: Boy’s Night Out

Hope John will not cause any trouble to Peter, B & J. He is so mean.

Love the boy enjoying the Babylon. Like when Brian turn to PR mode when Mark dancing on the bar. It is a good cause to donate to Vic Grassi House.

Brilliant chapter Mr Hamster, JT.

Muah!! Muah!! Muah!!



Author's Response:

There isn't much John can do but run his mouth. He has to face how good Brian is to them. Brian excells turning a potentially controversal event into a PR winner. Mr. Hamster takes a bow and thanks you for commenting.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 109: Boy’s Night Out

loved mark dancing on the bar, great idea to difuse any bad publicity from it by donating the money.



Author's Response:

Mark still loved the attention his good looks could create. Leave it to a PR man to avoid a controversy and turn it into a coup. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 109: Boy’s Night Out

I can remember the first time I was with a large group of gay boys and it felt so good not to be the only one. That's a very liberating experience for a boy coming out. I laughed at Mark dancing again and it was cool to donate the tips and more. John reaction to Peter's new life was very interesting. ..he sucked his way to paradise." What a jerk! Keep up the good work Mr. Hamster.



Author's Response:

I too remember my first moments in a large gay setting. Thanks for commenting.

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