Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 105: Three Weeks Early
Oh, I'm sure Sister cried on this chapter. Wonderful chapter elsewhere. I remember Intza’s first delivery. It was panic stations (we really thought of losing them and besides her OB wasn’t very positive before going in surgical unit). For the second pregnancy, everybody was scared to death (even the OB because he already knew the girl and Intza may be full of surprises) but there, we were all prepared… Tiffany have a difficult spell.
I loved the section with Troy Henry. Poor guy ! There are days like that where it is better to stay home…
Excellent
Big Love
Author's Response: I was thinking about your sister writing the chapter. Women have to put up with so much crap. I once knew a guy like Troy who did that and got fired off the job when he got all smart mouth with the CEO of our company; he thought it was a salesman he could abuse. It was the funniest shit I ever saw. Everybody just stared in shock when he did it. The guy had 3 kids too; what a shame. Big love back!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 105: Three Weeks Early
Wow, an emergency c-section ! Poor Tiffany... Not really funny !!! What memories in this chapter. A premature birth is extremely stressful and I know what I mean (two births, two C-sections)... For Txabi, it was an emergency c-section too with a big hemorragie and a high risk of death for me and my baby. For Maïalen, everyone expected as much (I’m the Queen of stressful pregnancies) and my OB had planned a scheduled cesarean delivery as soon as possible and would sufficiently viable for the baby. 1 month ago and almost half and Maia is doing well... And you're right, what do you tell about a baby whose main occupations are eat, sleep and poop ? ( ;) )
In any case, the clan is always there in family events. It's great that everyone comes to support and welcome the baby...
A huge cuddle for you (and a peck on Mr Hamster's ears)
Beautiful chapter, thanks a lot
Author's Response: I tried not to get bogged down in medical details and just made it happen. They're closer than many straight families in the world.
Cuddles back and Mr. Hamster loves the attention. Thanks!
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 105: Three Weeks Early
I have to catch up again!
I like how things unfolded with TMZ/WB. If B/J become WB's ad agency, won't they be required to get TMZ back on top again or are they considered a separate entity and hire their own advertising folks?
I bet a lot of actors feel the same way as Mark when they are filming on location without their families.
Nice to read about the plans and progress with the new property acquisition.
Mark's baby is on the way! I initially wasn't concerned about the baby being a few weeks early, our family has a history of preemies...but now he's in distress. Thank goodness the next chapter is waiting for me.
Great!
Author's Response: Brian will let down his ban on TMZ like it never happened. If their ratings are high enough he'll buy their air time now. Nobody will know anyway for the most part. I ended the cliffie before sleeping; I don't want to stress my readers! Love you!
Reviewer: Tiff (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 105: Three Weeks Early
Such a great story, I'm completely involved wiht the progress of your characters. My only wish is that we'd see more involved chapters with Brian and Justin with their sons !!!
Author's Response: Thank you Tiff for commenting and enjoying the story. It's a labor of love. Let me see if I can write more of the sons in the story. Gus is easy but an infant doesn't do much but eat, poop, and sleep at this age.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 105: Three Weeks Early
Oh, Mark!! Poor boy.... 1st the thing with TMZ, now the baby is 3 weeks premature.
Hope everything is okay.
Brian is right, there is only one asshole.
Kiss, kiss.
Author's Response: Writing the next chapter now. If you hit me with another review I'll dedicate the next chapter to you as my 1200th reviewer.
Kisses back!
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 105: Three Weeks Early
Baby cliff hanger huh? Update soon.
Author's Response: Somebody's in a hurry to get here. Writing the next chapter now. Thanks for commenting Dave.
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