Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 95: Hoping you’re the One
Gus is too adorable... I really can see him in front of the house looking at the helicopter… What child wouldn’t make a first flight in helicopter ? And then, what a clever little monkey ! He knows how get what he wants. Really, Brian gave much of himself in the conception...;
I hope that Michael has found a good man in Mark. It's good he takes this boy under his wing... This responsibility can only help to grow
Great chapter, great writter
Author's Response: Gus is a mini Brian in so many ways and takes traits from Justin too. The new twink Mark is a good kid and ready for learning which is Michael's job to help him. It's the trade off for the boy's love. Thanks for the compliment Ihintza.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 95: Hoping you’re the One
Brilliant. Gus is still small but really clever. He found the opportunity to fly again in the beautiful helicopter... When he will be older, he will be fearsome....
Michael has found someone. I hope for him he’s the good one and he enjoys again a happy life
I loved this chapter
Big hug
Ps : My sister is muddled up in her comments... Lol !!! I'm going to win the run hands down.....
Author's Response: I love her comments all the same. Gus is very smart for his age.
Big Hug Back!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 95: Hoping you’re the One
That is, the crazy and sad week is over. I’m now on my favorite recliner near the pool and I make myself comfortable to comment on your quick updates... Kids are sleeping, so I’m quiet with the boys around me who whisper and have fun
I’m glad both families agree so well. It’s good for Keith and Toby. It’s sometimes so difficult to be teen and gay. They have there an advantageous support. Some parents of our friends came here to have advices and talks with my fathers about their fears for their kids... With Otsoa and Gehexan, there were many passages in our house (especially Gex who made his coming-out very quickly outside)
Nancy sounds like a nice person, Mel deserves to have someone with her. In addition, Nancy has a little girl and she’s paralegal... They have lots in common...
Super Chapter
Big Love
Author's Response: When I didn't hear from you guys I figured you were dealing with the death of your friend still. I'm so sorry about that happening to him and you and his family. Nancy and Linda will make Mel very happy. JR has a friend to play with too; and an older sister.
Big love back to you Ihintza!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 95: Hoping you’re the One
WOW!!!
The heli is a nice addition. Gus get a kick riding it. Poor Gus he is missing his friend at Kinnetik, but soon he will see them at school.
Hope Mikey get to know Mark first, or he is going to get hurt.
Author's Response: Gus is clever; he wanted another ride on the helicopter and knew how to plead his case with lonelyness. Making up ads is not his only talent. He's a natural charmer for what he wants. Michael's Mark is a typical twink ready for training and raising. It's up to Michael how he turns out.
Love you!
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 95: Hoping you’re the One
I loved how Brian sprang the heli on Justin and giving Gus a ride. It is good to see Michael may have found someone and is at least helping him. It is tough to be that young and gay in the streets without help or friends. I leave my computer for a day and find all these new chapters! Mr. Hamster is not slacking at all.
Author's Response: Mr. Hamster is in rare form this week propelling the story forward in time. Thanks for reviewing Dave.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 95: Hoping you’re the One
I lived in the SF Bay Area all my life until a few years ago and whenver I was stuck in traffic trying to get across any of the bridges, I wanted a yacht. *g* But a helicopter would do just fine too, especially seeing the luxury and safety of this model!
You knew Gus would love the chopper. Had to laugh about J wanting to name both birds.
So, Nancy is working in Mel's office. Is she going to law school? Where is her little one, Linda?
Michael may have found his twink. Well, regardless of whether it works out or not (and I hope it does if they're good for each other), I'm glad Michael is doing a good deed. Maybe it's a shallow question, but what does this Mark look like? Is he a blond too?
Another great chapter, on to the next!
Author's Response: Damn! You got me. I forgot about Linda who's in Kindergarten at Kinnetik. Of course she had to be with Nancy on the helicopter. I blew it and will go fix that. Thanks for pointing this out. I was up for hours and getting tired when I wrote that chapter. Mr. Hamster couldn't plot beta as he was crashed out. Nancy will take law classes part time during the day. Michael's Mark is fairly common looking; black hair and brown eyes but very cute and young. Thanks for commenting cakdg.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 95: Hoping you’re the One
sweet how mikie is helping mark, glad his is answering and asking questions honestly w/ mark
Author's Response: Michael has grown up. Thanks alys.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 95: Hoping you’re the One
great chapters JT.. this is a cool story..
Author's Response: Thank you very much Lesley for telling me and commenting. It is pretty angst free (so far). :P
Reviewer: jay (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 95: Hoping you’re the One
Such a touching end. No matter how much I hate Michael, I only want him to be happy and laave Brian and Justin alone.
I am really enjoying this series. Keep up the great work!!!
Author's Response: Thanks jay; very good to hear from you and read your comments. Michael's ok now.
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