Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 78: I Want Mark
Ok, that strung out pic of your hamster is just wrong. Almost creeps me out as much as Trey must feel watching his mother having sex with the opportunistic pool boy.
I know I personally gave him a line and enabled him. But, Im reformed now and so he too must be.
So hamster, this is it. Your last hit from me. I advise quitting cold turk---
Author's Response:
Heah saving Mr. Hamster got me 1,000 review hits :) He gets better I promise. When it comes to me seeking review comments I am totally shameless, ask anybody. I'll kill the rodent for more reviews. Thank you for making my day!
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 78: I Want Mark
Love the pic. This story is great. That's what you get from watching too much porn.
Author's Response: LMGAO !!!
Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 78: I Want Mark
That picture os scary as hell :)
Author's Response: He was pretty tweeked out when I got it.
Reviewer: bjhunt (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 78: I Want Mark
give the the kids give them the kids
Author's Response: Jerry will save his children. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 78: I Want Mark
I want Mark too....! Jerry, Jerry, Jerry..... I too, will do anything for the one I love.
Ecxellent as always.
OMG!!! Hehehehe..... Mr Hamster... I still love you.
Take care.
Author's Response: Mark is a hottie for sure. Glad you liked the chapter and let me know it. Mr. Hamster photos indirectly helped get 30 reviews over night sailing us pass 1,000.
Hugs!
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 78: I Want Mark
uggg, that hamster needs to have a facial.
great chapter though.... scary hampster photo!!!!eeeeek
Author's Response: He was pretty wired for that photo. See what I've been putting up with? Thanks for commenting very much.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 78: I Want Mark
I like that Mark is bonding with Jerry's kids. But it sounds like Jerry & Mark need to get them away from the ex asap...not a good environment. Full time daddydom coming up?
Well, I'm glad that Mark's mother can't reopen any old wounds. People like that never go away and hurt too many people along the way (including themselves).
Love that Hunter is getting the star treatment (I wonder what Ben & Debbie think of it all), but he's working for it, too. Like the ideas he's come up with. I think he's going to be rolling in bananas. *g*
Mr. Hamster looks like he's seriously tweeked already. That's one seriously homely rodent! Lol.
Oh, another chapter, yay! On to the next...
Author's Response: They will become full time fathers now. It's good practice for Mark too if he has a baby. Hunter is perfect for advertising; a natural talent with good looks for acting/modeling. The hamster pictures set a record for me in most reviews overnight.
Hugs!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 78: I Want Mark
Too good... Jerry, take your children with you. Take them away from this bitch ! It seems you are the only one with Mark who can give them all the love they deserve ...
Wow, JTS, you did a wonderful job here
Big kisses for you
PS : Mr Hamster is nasty-looking. He makes me jump... A good night's rest will do him much good. A big kiss for him if he takes this rest very soon
Author's Response: Jerry will get his kids in record time. Thanks for the compliment Ihintza. Mr. Hamster is all good now.
Big Kisses Back!
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 78: I Want Mark
ps little hampster is one scary dude...mr. hampsert switch to decaf...and just say no..lol :)
Author's Response: He promises to go cold turkey and off the review meth once he sees 1,000 reviews. He's really cute when he isn't high and still very creative.
Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 78: I Want Mark
Well, Mr. Hamster wants more reviews...
I am really enjoying reading the story and look forward to each chapter as you write it. I especially love the 'ads' that each person has developed. I think I like the 'booty' one the best.
It will be interesting to see Brian and Justin's reaction to Lindsey being let 'out'.
I would like to see a little more with Emmett, pershaps it is time to bring Drew back????
Author's Response: Thank you Eileen for commenting. I love to read a new name in a review; it gives a name to my readers and a connection I don't have without your reviews. Your ideas for Emmett and Drew or excellent. Let me work on that once I get past this family emergency for Jerry and Mark.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 78: I Want Mark
please let jerry get his kids and put his ex and her boy toy in jail or the poor house... what's going on with gus? does he know he'll have a new baby brother?
Author's Response: Next chapter is the showdown for Jerry's kids with the lawyers. Forgive me; I meant to write Gus and the new baby in the story and forgot to. I'll soon remedy that. Thank you for reminding me; it's important.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 78: I Want Mark
Wow!!!!!!
You go Mr. Hamster. This chapter totally rocks. Wow!
Author's Response: Your lines was the hit to get Mr. Hamster spinning good now. Next chapter underway.
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 78: I Want Mark
This just keeps getting better and better. Mark will make a great second dad. Tell the hamster we need more now. Please.
Author's Response: Mr. Hamster could barely keep his little eyes open after four chapters in about 20+ hours straight awake. He snorted your line and wiggled his butt, and slowing climbed on his wheel. Looks like maybe one more chapter tonight. Thank you Lorie!
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