Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 70: Lovers
Just had a vision of his sister with Tyler! Like Brother, like sister.
Author's Response: Yeah, one just has to look at Justin and see how Molly would be. Thanks Kat.
Reviewer: Kane (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 70: Lovers
Is it wrong that I was extremely turned on by that.
Author's Response: I don't think so; young love has been an inspiration to people forever. Since the vast majority of my readers are women I wrote it for them. Thank you for commenting.
Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 70: Lovers
OMG that was soooooooooooooooooooooooo hot. lve it
Author's Response: Writing straight sex is a challenge for a gay man to do. Thanks for commenting Jamie.
Reviewer: benfam (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 70: Lovers
Good writing,but as a parent l find a 13 year old having sex CREEPY.
lt was written beautifully and l would have liked it more if she was 15 but at 13 all l found it was SAD. Little girl trying to grow up. Giving up something of yourself before you even know who you are.
Grown men sitting around joking about 13 year old having sex also CREEPY.
The fact that everyone is so accepting of a CHILD having sex is beyond me.
Jusin has never struck me as dumb but he certainly earns the dumb blonde tag in my opinion for keeping his mum in the dark.
Author's Response: It's just a ficton story. I can say Molly and Tyler will be together for a very long time. Thank you for commenting and there will be no more scenes of them making out again in the story.
Reviewer: Anngy (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 70: Lovers
Wow...umyeah, this was different. I know teens are doing these things but something just doesn't feel right about this here. Honestly it just feels some what dirty. This is my least fav chapter and I can't read this one again as I have all other chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. There're no more chapters like this one with Molly and Tyler. Enjoy the story.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 70: Lovers
Wow, what a chapter. First Jerry and Mark and then Molly and Tyler. Very well written straight scene.
Author's Response: *grins* Thank you!
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 70: Lovers
Jerry & Mark wet and very hot!
Molly & Tyler...condoms are not optional. I know kids are frequently stupid when their hormones are involved. This read like them getting together was a pre-planned event (he wasn't sure she would meet him, she was on the pill), but neither of them had a condom...very poor planning. I mean if she's knowledgeable enough to get on the pill, give him a blowjob without any prior experience, she should know about STD's, too. Sorry, this is my maternal instinct rearing its head. Otherwise, well written.
Just wait until J figures out it wasn't a dream!
On to the next...
Author's Response: I caused a bit of controversy with them not using a condom. I felt even today most kids don't use them when they are young and new to sex so that's how I wrote it; although I agree condoms are very important. Justin follows his hunch next chapter and finds out the truth and deals with it in a big brother fashion. Thanks cakdg for commenting very much.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 70: Lovers
And now, you've started the discussion here around the table, 1st time with or without condom ?...Personally, it was with one… Well, now, I'm going to dive into the pool because I still have the last chapter in the head ...
Excellent chapter, but I imagine Jennifer when she’ll know... She’s qoing to freak out ! Justin apparently knows now...! LOL
Even if a girl with a boy don’t turn me on, I must say it's really well written. Bravo!
*Grin *
Gehexan
Author's Response: If I don't create controversy I'm a poor writer. If I get arrested; I may some day be great! hehehe
Jennifer raised Justin; if she can survive that; a straight teenage girl is going to be a breeze. Thanks for the compliment. In my twenties I walked on the wild side a few times. It's not all make up for me about sex with a hot girl.
Grins back!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 70: Lovers
I don’t want to play the moralizer but just remember that condom is super important... Molly is perhaps on the pill but she must protect herself against STD... That said, a nice moment between these two teens. You are as great at straight sex than gay sex (a description full of life as always and in the same time so sweet...). I wish them a lot of love. These two are gorgeous...
Ah, memories, memories
I love Justin and Brian here...
Big kisses
Author's Response: I agree totally about condoms. I've known dozens of guys who got HIV because they didn't wear them or care. Thanks to meds; many are still alive. That said; realistically young teenagers today are the first not to use a condom; they feel they're safe since they're new at sex. And finally I promise no teenager got an STD in the creation of this fiction.
Thanks for your review and compliment. I admit in my gay youth I experimented with about six girls; one really good too! She made me think twice how good she was. I was her second boy and she was so fresh and hot. I use that memory in my writings.
Big big kisses back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 70: Lovers
Hmmm.... Like brother, like sister??
Can't wait..
Kiss, kiss
Author's Response: Yes, those Taylor kids love their men. They do it so well too. Was the fact Tyler looked so much like a young Brian part of the equation of love? I hope mother Taylor can handle the next one's hormones better than she handled the first one. Thanks so much for your review complicated. Mr. Hamster is blowing kisses back.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 70: Lovers
molly.... molly.... molly, i don't know what to say...no condom... woooow well i guess you'll be seeing alot of him in the next 9 months and 18+ years.
Author's Response: Ha! Molly had the sense to get birth control first. She'll be seeing lots of Tyler anyway; they're very much in love. Justin takes his vision to the next level, next chapter; going up right now! Thanks for commenting nicole.
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 70: Lovers
oh oh i can sens some trouble in paradise with Molly and Tyler, a pregnancy maybe i dont know.
Many Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: Molly said she was on the pill. Girls can get them in America from Planned Parenthood clinics without a parent's permission. She's awfully young to get knocked up. Justin has other concerns about Tyler which he explores in the next chapter. Thanks for commenting Buffytess.
Hugs Back!
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