Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2010 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 66: Landing Boeing
If pointing out that your word choices sound racist makes me a "troll" in your book, I can live with that.
But rather than calling me names, wouldn't a better choice have been to fix the way you worded that small scene so it doesn't sound racist anymore?
Author's Response:
You have 5 names and one IP address. It's not racist, or sexist. You have a chip on your shoulder. Not my problem. Hugs!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2010 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 66: Landing Boeing
You say, "The Native Americans were already here. So this does discribe the first to come here."
Incorrect. The ancestors of the Native Americans were the FIRST to come here. If you say that Europeans were "the first people" to come here, you are saying that anyone who come before them weren't people. I know that's not how you meant it, but it IS what you are saying.
And no, I'm not "nitpicking a little boy learning"; I'm criticizing the words you put in the mouth of his teacher who should supposedly know better.
Author's Response: I've seen your postings on MW before. You like to flame. On the internet we all that a troll. Have a blessed day anyway.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2010 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 66: Landing Boeing
“So the first people to America came from England?” Gus asked his tutor and teacher Lily.
“For the most part yes; the very first people were explorers and fishermen. The first people who came to live here and raise their families here came from mostly England and Ireland.
So, according to Lily, the Native Americans--who were here before those European explorers and fishermen--weren't people. Interesting.
Author's Response: The Native Americans were already here. So this does discribe the first to come here. This is telling a 5 year old how people came from Europe.
For you to nitpick a little boy learning is a bit much.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 66: Landing Boeing
Everything is brilliant in this chapter, really ... They have the contract, they can own the tower free and clear. Justin will be on top because it's his team that wins the race. (with a great idea and more, it's true !)
I like the discussion between Jerry and Mark. The film will be a box office hit…
Super good chapter
Big love
Gehexan
Author's Response: Now Kinnetik is well established with plenty of clients to service. Our boys are doing very well now. The Rage movie will be very special and shocking to some people.
Big love back!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 66: Landing Boeing
I’m happy for the account and, OMG, Justin’s team won... Brian, your lover desserves his recompense.
Hey, now I know what you mean when it comes to "booty":)
I love the chapter
All my love
Author's Response: The term booty to my knowledge comes from African American Soul music from the early 70s; that's were I first heard the term used in songs and not as the looting riches of pirates. Brian acts like he doesn't want to get topped but he really loves it when Justin takes him.
Love back!
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 66: Landing Boeing
Team Justin comes through again and the victor gets the booty. Lol.
Nice to see the updates of what's going on with the other characters, too.
Great! On to the next...
Author's Response: Brian never had a chance against the imaginations of the aritistic department. It not like they have to make sex deals to have sex; but after 5+ years of doing it, this is their way to spice up their sex life still. Besides; it's good for business. hehehehehe
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 66: Landing Boeing
Brilliant!!
Good job Gary, Allen & Angle.
Kiss, Kiss.
Author's Response: Those boys are pretty smart. Brian will be pleased.
Kisses Back!
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 66: Landing Boeing
Glad to see they got Boeing and nice how they did it avoiding the negative stuff about their aircraft. I like how you go from scene to scene keeping us informed what''s happening with other people. Thank for the update.
Author's Response: "When you don't have an ad ready, kiss their asses." ~Brian Kinney
Glad you like the scene changes of the story; I hope it adds more entertainment for the readers as we follow many characters in time. Thank you for commenting Dave.
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