Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 65: Problems

Well, Justin in competition with Brian (good bet !)... Who will win ? Justin’s team or Brian’s ?? Surprise… The two are motivated.

I love the filming. Mark worried about a possible woody... Hey, dude, if I had Matt around me…, I get a Woody too !... Ho, ho ! Matt / Rage / JT / Mark… Soooooooooo good...

Big big hug

Gehexan 

PS: To answer your comment CH 62 - All my tests are negative (the last in early July) but for now I'm under « observation ». I cheated on Tomás a few time (most recently last June - I know ... No need to add… It almost cost me my guy). Tomás is so nice. He is 32 and he is very patient with me (He’s my older’s best friend since childhood so he knows me well, very well). He told me « if you are a good boy, it will be your Christmas’ gift but after only you and me… The ball's in your court ». I’m ready… I’m so ready…



Author's Response:

Thanks Gehexan for your comments. They love to make bets and deals for sex; after being together for over 5 years it spices up their sex lives and it's good for business. Mark had fun filming with Matt the sex scenes and they were hot. Take the advice of an old gay man who has made the same mistakes; stay on the path you're on and your life will be so much better for it. I can't remark on something I've done myself at your age. I'm sure you'll be fine and Thomas sounds wonderful; I wonder your age however. Thanks again for your reviewing support to my novel.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 65: Problems

The meal is finished, the children are in bed. We settled face to face to read your updates...

This competition is motivating... I hope they find the perfect idea for Boeing.

I loved the exchange between Matt and Mark.

Weird idea that Emmett’s...

Great chapter,

A lot of kisses



Author's Response:

Sounds like a peaceful time in France tonight. Our lovers enjoy bringing sex into their business activities any way they can. Emmett's a nut; especially after he gets laid.

Kisses back!

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 65: Problems

The sex scene is kinda funny with the sock (I think).

Can't wait to see what the ad for the boeing gonna be.

Excellent.



Author's Response:

Kind of a fill in chapter moving the plot forward and adding new details to the story. Soon we just forward in time to June and our boys with Gus go to Ireland for 12 days.

Hugs!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 65: Problems

loved Em, only he could think up a German nazi/ polish pow wedding theme LOL

Matt and Mark talking/ acting was pretty funny and informative too.



Author's Response:

Emmett is a riot after having sex and Ted could see it. I've had friends who are actors and know a few tricks of the trade to add to the story's details that are accurate; the nylon sock is a real thing they use filming sex scenes for example. Thanks for commenting alys.

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 65: Problems

This was bound to happen sometime.  A whale of a customer has a product that is difficult to sell, especially as it something the average consumer buys indirectly.  Too bad you can't use all of B's idea, but knocking your competitor's product safety by name is setting yourself up for a legal nightmare not only from Airbus but possibly the flying public too, for using scare tactics (doesn't mean I didn't like it though! *g*) 

They've had very little time as yet.  I know they will come through.  So they dazzle 'em a little first with the plane, good.  What else do they have up their sleeves?  Can't wait to find out!

Haha!  Em is truly one of a kind! And come to think of it, so is Ted, too (in his own way). Lol.

Well, the movie was always going to create controversy, now it's guaranteed.  Just think of all the free publicity coming their way.  This should be fun!

Great chapter as always!



Author's Response:

You're very preceptive; Boeing is a tough nut to crack for Kinnetik. The best agency in the world couldn't raise their sales numbers. And you're right about the ad, legal would have cancelled much of the wording if not Boeing themselves. It was only a rough draft and an excuse to get f*cked for Justin! Working on the next chapter tonight. Thanks for commenting very much.

Hugs!!!

Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 65: Problems

Good update



Author's Response:

Thank you Dave for saying that.

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