Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 59: Bomb
Make a false bomb threat, it’s stupid. And use the phone of his boyfriend for that, it’s nonsense…This guy, Randy, he’s a great dummy… Randy, you prat !!! Fortunately, all's well that ends well
Wow! An excellent chapter, JT
It has kept me in suspense... great job
Author's Response: Thank you! I was hoping the chapter brought excitement to the plot. Your review motivates me to do it again for you.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 59: Bomb
I sure did not see this coming. Glad it was only a threat after reading the title for the chapter. Good work JT.
Author's Response: It was little exciting that day for our boys and the Kinnetik family in the tower. Glad you liked it David and thankful for your comments.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 59: Bomb
Great chapter JT.
Another brilliant twist. What an entertainer your are.
Enjoy reading this chapter while waiting for the time to break my fast.
Kiss, kiss.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it complicated. We needed a touch of excitement in the story.
Kisses Back!
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 59: Bomb
Had to laugh at B's reaction to Cynthia's thank you hug and kiss. After so many years of enduring Deb's lipstick kisses, I'm not surprised he asked Cyn if she was wearing any. I'm glad he won't lose her as his PA either, after so many years together it would be like him losing one of his arms.
The consultation between J and Gus over the castle was cute. Gus is learning that sometimes the ideas are there immediately and other times it has to cook awhile or needs other people's input to bring the flash of inspiration.
A bomb! Damn that's something none of them needs reminders of. And how moronic. Randy uses a cell phone that can be traced. Likewise, what did he hope to accomplish with a bomb threat? To get a job? Duh!
Just as a side question, a few times going home or leaving home in the limo, all are present except for JR. Is she away?
Great chapter! On to the next...
Author's Response: In the show on rare moments Cynthia shows affection to Brian so it's very much with canon. She's already doing the job of CAO and now has the title and pay to go with the responsibilities. Randy was striking out in pain and not thinking about his actions. He didn't think cell phones can be traced but they can unless they are temporary phones you can buy at a convenience store. I could say JR has been sleeping but the truth is I forgot to write her in. She has been in the limo everyday.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 59: Bomb
OMG ! I’m glad it’s just a false alarm... What a stupid guy, this Randy ! And for what ? Nothing ! He ends up in jail, he lost his boyfriend... His life has been completely wasted now…
Fortunally, Brian, Cynthia and Justin keep their self-control.
Exciting chapter with this little hint of anxiety
JT, little devil…
Author's Response: I had to add a bit of excitement to our story! This was an all to common problem in corporate America; a mad ex-employee causes sh*t to happen and hurts business and/or people in the process. It happens every day. I just posted a new chapter for you too.
Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 59: Bomb
thanks for the update
Author's Response: You're very welcomed. I'm working on the next chapter now. The boys are a bit rattled the next day. Thanks for reviewing darkraven.
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 59: Bomb
great chapters i have just read 12 of them just now, real life is a bitch right now so i havent had the time to comment or read but i love them and you are so good at this and to see that Gus is so good at being an "ad man" is so cool he is a smart little boy. Justin and Brian are good parents and now Lily is pregnant too i think i it is so wonderful.
Many Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: Thank you Buffytess for commenting and letting me know your reading. I hope to make another chapter tonight before sleeping again.
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