Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 56: What Every Pirate Wants
I like Gus' idea. Great.
Author's Response: Thank you! Gus is an amazing kid indeed but look who his dad is too! I'll answer all reviews soon; I have to write when the hamster is hot. Love you very much! Hugs! :)
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2009 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 56: What Every Pirate Wants
Start w/ Gus, end w/ Gus!
Enjoyed the in between.
Quite funny at the end!!
Author's Response: I was LMAO writing that chapter. Glad you liked it! Thanks!
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 56: What Every Pirate Wants
How fun to be able to swap stories with each other on the way home from work in the limo. I'm not sure how much time has passed, but is Lily pregant? Is Mel & Jenny's house underway?
So, now Linds knows what she is missing.
Kip Thomas again...B & J never had their conversation about him did they? I swear you give Mel some of the best lines. I laughed about the geezer making Carl look like a twink. Lol
HaHaHa! Out of the mouths of babes indeed! Provided the client has a sense of humor, I smell another home run hit right out of the ballpark! That was really funny.
Oh the places we will go...I'm on to the next chapter. Really fun!
Author's Response: Lily will soon get tested. Mel's house is being built and has about 6 weeks to go before she can move into it. You are so right about Gus hitting another home run ad.
Hugs!
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 56: What Every Pirate Wants
Gus is really too much. I’m in the same condition as Brian and Justin. And then Kip Tomas appears in the story, an opportunity for Jus to mention his meeting with Kip a few years ago !!!
Love Jerry and Mark ...
Funny chapter
Gehexan
"Shake shake shake, shake shake shake,
Shake your booty! Shake your booty!
Oh, shake shake shake, shake shake shake,
Shake your booty! Shake your booty."
Author's Response: Gus has that natural talent to dream up a great ad like his daddies can. Thanks for reminding me that song.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 56: What Every Pirate Wants
Jesus, I love this little boy... Sure, he has the gene of advertising in his DNA...Like father, like son ! Another brilliant idea out of the brain of this little sweetheart. It's too cute. Lindsay becomes aware of the fame of his son. I hope this won't cause problems ...
I loved reading this update
Great job here, JT
Ps : I don't know argot terms (my English is very oversimple) but I would understand so Gehexan & Tomás explained to me the different terms....and performed a *booty* dance demonstration for me. OMG, I'm happy my boy is already sleeping in his room ;). My parents and I nearly died laughing... I don't want to know what they are smoking tonight
Author's Response: I sure hope my other out of country readers can understand it. Booty has two meanings, the treasure looted by a pirate, and a person's hips or butt. Thanks for bringing that up.
Reviewer: Coffee Queen (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 56: What Every Pirate Wants
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I'm glad you like my name. I'm quite fond of it myself. I'm known by 3 names on the net but Coffee Queen is my favorite. Of course occasionally it is already taken before I get to a site, I hate when that happens.
I love that Gus has clients. "You can't have my booty." Perfect.
Author's Response: Gus is now the darling of the advertising world. The funny thing is he's really good at it too. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 56: What Every Pirate Wants
WOW!!
Great job Gus. Brilliant.
Wonderful.
Kiss, kiss
Author's Response: WOW !!! I don't think I've ever answered so many reviews in one sitting. I'm so grateful for everyone writing them. Glad you loved this chapter.
Kisses Back!
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 56: What Every Pirate Wants
laaawd have mercy gus...hopefuly mikey will keep on behaveing himself....why do i see gus's mom ether trying to write or call gus.
Author's Response: Gus is a wiz kid and a real chip off the old block. Michael will be very good now. Lindsay's in a lock down mental ward and can't do shit. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 56: What Every Pirate Wants
love this story, thanks
Author's Response: Thank you very much Marny for your review. I aim to please.
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