Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 53:Oprah: Part One
Wonderful....... wonderful!
You know I love Gus!!
Author's Response: I've been away from home for a few days; time to catch up on my reviews and write the next chapter. Thank you Susan; Gus is also a favorite character of mine as well.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 53:Oprah: Part One
Look at the Kinney's on Oprah!! Good for them, they've worked so hard to achieve this.
Author's Response: Gus was quite a hit nationwide; his story resonanated with the people. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 53:Oprah: Part One
Kinnetik Jr is a great idea. But some of the people that showed great talent were recent college grads (Gary and Terry). Will the Jr team have access to come up with the slogans for Kinnetik Sr too or is that too complicated?
The Oprah show...Gus is definitely a Kinney. Lol
Great chapter! Can't wait to read the next...
Author's Response: The new people in Kinnetik Junior will all compete there creating the best ads for the smaller companies. If someone shows vision and imagination they will be promoted upstairs to the big leagues. If someone upstairs starts to be crappy and without vision they get to move downstairs. I can see them letting them brainstorm an ad concept from time to time in both departments. Gus was adorable; wasn't he?
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 53:Oprah: Part One
This kid is really adorable. He’s so touching, so spontaneous.
When I say that Justin is brilliant... See!
Very good chapter
I can’t wait for the next update
Big love
Ps : No, sorry for you, Intza... I'm just a true gentleman... The girl first. Stop your happy dance around the table... NOW !!!
Author's Response: Such a genteman you are; however, I'm the winner with all the great reviews you both wrote me. Let the girl dance; she earned it. Thanks guys so very much. I'm soon writing the next chapter once I catch up on reviews.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 53:Oprah: Part One
Justin is a mine of ideas... A branch called Junior, great idea !
Oh... I’m repeating myself but Gus is wonderful. He’s adorable in front of a celebrity as powerful qu'Oprah. I smiled all the time reading ...
I’m longing now to read Oprah, part 2
This chapter is incredible
Thank you JT
I won !
Author's Response: Way to go Ihintza! I've enjoyed you and brother's comments as you raced to the final chapter posted. I'll be writing Oprah: Part 2 today. It's my honor to write for such devoted fans of my work.
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 53:Oprah: Part One
Ohpa - OMG I just loved that.
Thanks for the Gus story - The entire story is wonderful but Gus is so loved, so smart, so cute, I find myself reading these parts over and over.
I have a request which I didn't think I would ever make. Could you turn the Mikey story around a bit. I find myself feeling bad for him. I need him back into the family fold - with Brian forgiving him - it's how it should work.
Glad you don't seem to need a lot of sleep - keep writing...
Jane
Author's Response: You're in luck Jane; I was already beginning to turn things around for Michael beginning with him stopping crack. You will see changes in future chapters for him. Justin is his best friend and he doesn't know it yet.
Reviewer: Misty (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 53:Oprah: Part One
Hi JT,
Well I read all of Embraced and loved every word of it! And I have to say I'm not disapointed by Forever Yours in the least! Fantastic work!! I am so loving the story line with Gus it is just so fun! Keep up the phenominal writing!
Anxiously waiting for more...
Misty from Maryland.
Author's Response: Hello Misty;thank you for commenting. I'm delighted my stories have entertained you. I'd love to hear from you again. Gus is a major character of this story for good.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 53:Oprah: Part One
Love this chapter so much. I am so happy it's make cry (what can I say being me, I cry all the time - sad, happy or angry)
A very CUTE chapter. Another level/plot writen so beautifully. I am so PROUD of Gus. What a smart, funny, witty, polite boy he is, perfect.
I can't stop smiling. Superb job JT. Thank you so much for making my day.
Love both of you.
Author's Response: I researched a lot before writing the chapter; learning about Oprah and her partner, etc; watching Utube of her on TV. Glad you liked it. Mr. Hamster is blushing for you now.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 53:Oprah: Part One
oh my gosh, gus is so precious.. i loved this chapter..
Author's Response: It seems I hit a home run with this chapter for a lot of people. Thank you!
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 53:Oprah: Part One
great updates.... you are a really fast worker. I like that... :-)) rose
Author's Response: Now that I've slept I can write again. I live on a crazy schedule. Glad you enjoyed the updates. :)
Reviewer: Coffee Queen (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 53:Oprah: Part One
Oh my, I do love this. I'm always happy to see that you've added a new chapter. I really like your Gus also.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. Gus is a sweet heart and smart as a whip. Please comment again.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 53:Oprah: Part One
you better work the crowd gus lol...gus got a girlfriend :) i wounder if briean will flip out back stage.
Author's Response: Gus has the audience around his finger. I pity Brian and Justin having to follow him on camera. Gus is 5, he has a friend who is a girl; therefore she is his girl-friend. Thanks for commenting.
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