Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 52: Hurricane Gus $$$$$

The humor in this is great.  Love it!!!



Author's Response:

Gosh! Thank you so much for your chapter reviews. I'm on a roll writng my new novel but I'll answer them soon. You're the best reader a writer can get. Love you! Hugs!  :)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 52: Hurricane Gus $$$$$

GREAT, great, great!!! 

ALWAYS love the business info you add to the story! 

Love the conversation in the "class room" w/ the kids, perfect!

REALLY enjoying the story.......



Author's Response:

Since business is a big part of their lives I had to discribe it some what. I'm glad it doesn't bore you to tears. I'm very happy to see you still reading the story.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 52: Hurricane Gus $$$$$

Man, Brian and Justin are tough, businessman. Don't mess with the Kinney's. Look what one ad by a five year old did!



Author's Response:

They never dreamed the Gus story would have such ramifications for new business and good will. The Gus story took the nation by storm. Any success story by a kid in a recession will be a winner. Thanks Kat!

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 52: Hurricane Gus $$$$$

Catch the publicity wave generated by Hurricane Gus!!

Wow! All the wheeling and dealing.  Funny how sure J was when initially making the deal with Time (don't let'em see or hear you sweat) and was uncertain when retelling the deal with B.  Then it was old hat when negotiating with Oprah.  Lol.  I can imagine that B couldn't suppress a big grin.  I can't!

Another great one!  On to the next... 



Author's Response:

A reader requested more Gus and family and less business; I combined the two for a series of real fun chapters to write for me. Never underestimate the power of a cute smart little boy in front of a camera and a kick ass story of success that is honestly true. I hope you like what follows too.

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 52: Hurricane Gus $$$$$

Hey, there’s a huge crowd trying to get ! The publicity around Gus is excellent... Now, They need to handle it. I hope Vance will make a success of his assignment...

I love Justin. He has doubts about himself but why ? He’s brilliant. I love aswell Brian’s reaction, really great

Super chapter

Thank you JT



Author's Response:

I hoped to keep them in character as the plot unfolded around them. It was a fun chapter to write too. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 52: Hurricane Gus $$$$$

The celebrity of little Gus disrupts quickly the business world... What a plug ! Everybody wants the huge machine Kinnetik to boost their company. Vance did already a good job before but I hope Brian is right to trust him now...

I love the moment of doubt in the Justin’s head. He is adorable. Artist, wise businessman and an excellent negotiator, what a man! Brian can be proud of him ...

Beautiful chapter

Kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss



Author's Response:

Just being with Brian has rubbed off on Justin; showing him the way of good business; add  to that his imiganation and vision and they make a powerful team together.

Kisses Back!

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 52: Hurricane Gus $$$$$

WOW!! Fantastic.

Life..... when doing something new no one to land their help or support, but when you on top of the world everyone jump in & want a piece of you.

You are the man Gus.

Hugs.



Author's Response:

I can only imagine if Gus can learn to accompish this at five, what will he be like at 25? He is offically the youngest ad man at Kinnetik now. More creative Gus in the future.

Hugs Back!

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 52: Hurricane Gus $$$$$

*sitting here laughing my ass off* oh my lord are those boys ever busy busy beavers.. good for them.... loved this chapter..

 



Author's Response:

Thank you Lesley; here comes the next chapter and then I must sleep.

Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 52: Hurricane Gus $$$$$

omg that was sooooo funny.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Got to sleep soon. Thanks for commenting darkraven. Next chapter Oprah Show.

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 52: Hurricane Gus $$$$$

it looks like gus will be buying his fisrt car his first year of junor high school..lol



Author's Response:

More like his first jet! They had no idea the pubic interest Gus's story would create and it snowballed for them adding to that the amazing growth of Kinnetik in a serious recession is newsworthy. Everybody loves a winner. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 52: Hurricane Gus $$$$$

excellant chapter, for being the 'artist' justin definatley has a business head on his shoulders. can't wait to hear about being on the set of oprah etc.



Author's Response:

Justin is still very much the artist however Brian's business wisdom is rubbing off on him. Justin channels Brian when he needs to. I'm skipping the Time and WSJ interviews and going straight to the Oprah Show next chapter.

Stock tip: If you own stock in any NY ad agencies it's time to sell! Thanks for commenting.

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