Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2012 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 48: Changes
Kinnitek is growing by leaps and bounds. First with a jet plane then with limos. Now there's a baby to come into the mix
Author's Response: Thank you very much for all the wonderful comments. Forgive my late reply - I don't get messages alerting me of new reviews and it's been awhile since I checked. I really appreciate you comments very much.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 48: Changes
They are definitely having a wonderful year.
Author's Response: Business is very good for Kinnetik.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 48: Changes
GREAT chapter!!
I always enjoy the business side of your stories. It's very interesting to me & I appreciate all the info.
Love Vance is doing well.
Should be fun having CA come for a visit.
Time to make a baby, YEA!
Author's Response: Business is a part of their lives and important to the story to a point. These are happy times for the Kinney family. Justin is very happy to soon be a father. Thanks Susan.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 48: Changes
Good for Vance! This might be just what he needed, I'm glad he's an assett to Kinnetik.
Aww, time to make a baby!
Author's Response: In time Vance realizes he's still a good ad man and will grow with Kinnetik. Justin is delighted to become a father. Thanks Kat. Your chapter reviews are so important to me as I race for the historic 1,000 reviews on MW.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 48: Changes
I can't imagine coming up with 68 ads for cars, especially after just completing the set for Ford. But if anyone can, their team can.
J brought up a good point about their security and they have a son that could be targeted, too. Good that's now covered.
Lily is ready!
Very good chapter, on to the next...
Author's Response: The ad men can make generic ads for most models and some special ones for special cars or trucks. A lot of time, thought and imagination goes into an ad or a commerical; even a basic one. They are now billionaires on paper at least and yes they need protection. Enjoy your reading hopefully as much as I enjoy your comments.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 48: Changes
Sorry brother… But with the sling, I can type with one hand !!! See !!!
Justin is right. They are extremely rich and must have a team to protect them. A jet and now limos, I repeat myself but they really have a wonderful life.
Vance made a super good job. After all, it’s a good recruit
Hey, the baby, the baby, the baby ... Go Lily, pick up Justin and on the way to the clinic ... Hurry up!
Excellent chapter, you did a great job
Milesker anitz (Basque for 'thank you very much') – (mi-lech-kerr)
Muxuak, JT
Author's Response: For wearing a sling you didn't seem to slow down reviewing at all. Thank you! Things will move pretty fast in the story now.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 48: Changes
I race sis…
Justin is alone in charge… Hey, I love that. And he does a good job, even if he hasn’t been at Dartmouth (a little thought for his father : So there! Put that in your pipe and smoke it, Craig !)… And soon, the baby !
Well, I’d really like to have a limo, too… No more parking problem (good for Ihintza, she’s not very good at parking, she’s totally hopeless in front of a parallel parking… Ok, she has a handicap, she’s a girl ! OMG, if she read this comment, she’s going to make mincemeat of me !)
Great job here
Love
Gehexan
Author's Response: I'm going to be the winner of your little race. Thanks. Actually limos are a pain in the ass to drive and park especially the stetch ones. They are nice however if you have a big space waiting for it.
Love back!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 48: Changes
The Unions in the USA were started by and most of the members continue to be (as you so quaintly refer to them) "white people" -- unless you don't consider the Irish, Polish, Ashen Jews, Russians, Italian, Germans, etc., etc., "white"?
And BTW women who work in support and clerical roles stopped being referred to as "girls" sometime in the late 1970's or early 1980's after lots and lots of high-profile multi-million dollar lawsuits were settled in their favour. No one in this day and age who runs a successful company would EVER refer to their female colleagues like that or make that statement about race or unions. And if anyone were so foolish as to make such a statement in the hearing of any other successful corporate executive would find their career path immediately derailed.
It doesn't even matter if "that's how they really feel" or "that's how they talk at home" or "they were just joking around". If the wrong person heard that or god forbid recorded it on there cell-phone and posted it on YouTube, BOTH Companies would be in an incredible amount of trouble from the government, the unions, activist groups, etc.
I like the plots of stories a lot young man, but sometimes it's as thought you are writing it as if it were set back in the days of the TV Program "Mad Men". And you make me worry about what will happen to you and your eventual career if you do not realize that some of these things are not appropriate in Corporate America these days.
Author's Response: ?????????????????????????????????
What planet are you on? I didn't say "white people"; I said "white collar" as verses "blue collar". One is people paid with a salary and the other is people paid hourly. Race and nationality has nothing to do with it. Professional people who dress up are white collar. Working people who for instance, wear a uniform or blue collar and many are in a union like auto workers.
The term "girl friday" is office talk for a temporary hired help person from an agency who is not an employee to help a company in an emergency of workload. It can be a man or a woman. The term was created in the Depression when companies would only hire temp workers as needed to hold down cost. Back then the temp help was usually women. There is nothing sexist about it.
You got some kind of chip on your shoulder or something? Thanks for commenting anyway.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 48: Changes
GREAT chapter!!
Way to go Brian. Glad our sunshine didn't have a panic attack this time. With Brian out of town, he is doing great job at Kinnetik.
Wow! It's time to make baby! Can't wait!
I love to ride a limo (hope certain Mr Hamster get the hint).
A kiss on both cheek, on the nose, on the chin & on the forehead for you JT.
You know where I want to kiss you Mr Hamster....
Love both of you.
Author's Response: Ha! You're a sweet heart complicated; me and my hamster loves you much. We're spinning out new chapters now.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 48: Changes
loveing the story so far but is there away to cut back a little on the money talk, meaning the cost of everything big brian an justin buy, and put more time with family and gus...
sorry :)
Author's Response: Thanks nicole for commenting. There is all elements of their lives in my story and the business side is a big part of it. I'm writng Gus more in the story as he gets older. Many reviewers have expressed they enjoy the growth of Kinnetik and learning about the PR and movie business of Jerry. My story is want it is with a little bit of everything. I'm taking your concern under consideration and let me see if I can perhaps make it better for you.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 48: Changes
love how vance has clued into his strenghts again.
Author's Response: Vance will soon be an important member of the Kinnetik family. Thanks for commenting alys.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 48: Changes
so much is happening so fast. i think fritz may be on to something. are they overextending just a bit?
baby time. whoo hoo.
Author's Response: In the past other ad companys have been overwhelmed with an account the size of GM. Fritz will be surprised how efficent Kinnetik performs for him. Thank you so much or reviewing this chapter sjmpets3.
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