Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2012 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 46: Golden Chariot
Poor Michael. It sucks to be him.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 46: Golden Chariot
Good chapter.
Interesting where Michael may be going, especially w/ the last line.
Author's Response: Michael's depressed but doesn't have the guts to end his life. He has some problems before he gets better. Thanks for commenting Susan.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 46: Golden Chariot
Michael just got reminded yet again of how much he royally fucked up by hurtig Justin.
Author's Response: Michael is so typical of the poor me types of people. He is such a victim of fate. Thanks for commenting Kat.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 46: Golden Chariot
You just knew that B/J were going to christen their golden chariot, I'd want to too.
Well, may Michael will listen to Carl (a true father figure)? Can't say I would be any more excited than Michael would be to pick up garbage, but if you truly can't find anything else...
Loved the phone call home when everyone heard about the new jet. Yeah, I'll bet Michael wants to end it all, it's the easiest way out after all (supposedly). For Deb's sake I hope he won't.
On to the next chapter...
Author's Response: In no time there won't be a virgin corner or nook in that jet they didn't have sex in or on. Michael felt like dying but he doesn't have the guts to do it to himself. I get my memory of chapters in a jumble; as I said before; Micheal has one more dip in the ditch before putting his life together with a little help from the only person who has really helped him; again.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 46: Golden Chariot
You’re dead, brother !!!
Carl, no…it’s a waste of time... He’ll screw up again. Really, Michael is lucky to have always someone to help him out of difficulty...
Excellent chapter, I love Brian and Justin in their jet (and yes, even the little fantasy ...The fantasy is so good)
Big hugs
Author's Response: Now kids, settle down and play nice. Carl sees Debbie hurting and does what he can but Michael has to grow up. Justin is on a new plane in more ways than one.
Hugs Back!
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2009 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 46: Golden Chariot
Michael gets once again the help of someone...Now, it’s Carl who throws him a new line... How long before he spoils everything again ?
Justin's fantasy, too good! I love these little moments... Mr Hamster seems boosted by some comments and the flirt is good for him. (It makes me so jealous !!!)
Excellent chapter
You're a damn good writer
More kisses
Gehexan
Author's Response: Very quickly Michael messes up with a glass dick in his mouth. Getting the jet inspired Justin to day dream. Thank you so much for the kind compliment. Mr. Hamster is working over time to impress his new girl.
Kisses back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 46: Golden Chariot
Excellent! I love it.
Mikey... Mikey... Mikey....
Mr Hamster - Would you like to join mile high club with me??
Jt, please tell Mr Hamster I am sure his body is as delicius
Gehexan, I can guess what is on Mr Hamster mind. Some flirting is good for boosting energy (among other things) and it is so much fun!
Hugs for you JT. wink, wink Mr Hamster.
Author's Response: Danke complicated for commenting. Mikey is a mess. Hamster winks back; he loves the flirt too.
Hugs Back!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 46: Golden Chariot
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! Love back!
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 46: Golden Chariot
maybe mikie needs to think about rage again, how he could be a garbage collector by day...... ;-) bet justin would be receptive to developing a story and pitching it to jerry for a sequal movie
Author's Response: "Rage II: The Fall of Zephyr" You got me laughing with this one, but comic tragic stories don't do good on the big screen but it was a genius idea. You should write with that imagination. Thanks for reviewing alys.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 46: Golden Chariot
hehehe, boohoo michael..you fucked up bigtime .. ha picking up trash, wow just where he belongs, in the trash.. loved this chapter JT.
can't wait for some more....
Author's Response: Michael will find comfort, at the end of a glass dick. hehehehe Thanks for your review Lesley very much.
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 46: Golden Chariot
Wow, you're rough with Michael. But after what he did, you can't really back off now... Good update.
Author's Response: What can I say? He's an idiot. Thanks Kate for commenting.
Does anyone know what Carl means by don't start on the glass dick?
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 46: Golden Chariot
all chapters marvelous. they have the midas touch it seems. the jet just proves that lol.
Author's Response: They will earn the jet fair and square; how they do it is a secret of high finance and business between very trusting friends and beating taxes. Jerry is so loaded this was like donating a used car to a less fortunate relative for him. It was nothing and he has his eyes on a newer model. Every two years he trades up. He sees good karma helping Brian and Justin now to grow Kinnetik fast. Thank you for reviewing and commenting; so happy to see you still reading.
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