Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2012 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 41: Think with your dip stick, Jimmy.
It's a good thing Brian owns that building. Otherwise there would be no place to put anything.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 41: Think with your dip stick, Jimmy.
GO Gary!!
Once again, wonderful!
Like the updates w/ Mark & Jerry.
Author's Response: Me very glad you liked it. :P
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 41: Think with your dip stick, Jimmy.
That letter makes me want to work at Kinnetik!! I want a fabulous company like that to steal me away from the lame job I currently have.
Has Vance realized just how screwed he is yet? Demanding his stuff back? Clueeeeeless!! This meeting with him and Mel should be interesting.
Author's Response: Kinnetik is the place to work for sure. Vance has no cards to play; he's at the mercy of Mel and that's never good. Thanks Kat.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 41: Think with your dip stick, Jimmy.
Empire building is well underway! Loved the form letter. It will bring in the true talent.
Mark's training is doing very well in his training and his relationship with Jerry too.
I loved the slogan. I think it's the type that everyone talks about. Remember the 'Where's the Beef' campaign that years ago spread like wildfire? Old and young alike were gabbing about it.
Good idea for rescuing Vanguard employees...for relative few dollars (for them!) they get grateful potential new employees.
Another great chapter! Maybe one more before I'll need shuteye...
Author's Response: I do remember the "where's the beef" slogan and Walter Mondale using it in his presidental campaign. Some slogans are classics. Brian knows what it's like to depend on a paycheck. He has feelings for Vangard's employees who suffer by the man's failure. Except for Todd and his lover Randy, they hired all of Vangard's art and media department and soon more people will be brought on board to the ship Kinnetik by Ted. I'm very happy you're enjoying my work.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 41: Think with your dip stick, Jimmy.
I feel like I'm becoming a pro in the business world with you. I love to see Brian run their society... An iron fist in a velvet glove
The hamster deserves all the love he receives ...
Big hugs
Author's Response: Thanks! I love a story with a power couple B and J.
Reviewer: Coffee Queen (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 41: Think with your dip stick, Jimmy.
Imagine my joy to come back to this story and find not 1, not 2, not even 3 but 7 new chapters! *runs off to read* Hmm, I must remember to find time to sleep tonight.
Author's Response: Readers have complained my story causes lost of sleep. Thanks so much for commenting Coffee Queen. Another chapter going up now.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 41: Think with your dip stick, Jimmy.
And now, the machine sets in motion and very soon, they will be at the head of their empire. Brian is a f*****g super good leader.
I love this chapter.
I must say I have a slight preference for the last paragraph. Surprise ? I love these shower scenes. They are very inspiring ...
Big hugs
Gehexan
Author's Response: Even in my old age, we find the shower very nice still. Kinnetik is growing almost too fast, but not quite.
Hugs Back!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 41: Think with your dip stick, Jimmy.
Excellent! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: You know with all these review hits I will keep it up just for readers like you.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 41: Think with your dip stick, Jimmy.
Great chapter. Love the way you take me to the journey of empire Kinnetik. Good decision Brian. A very good management + good working environment = a very productive & loyal workers.
Classic shower scene (my imagination runing wild) love it.
Aww.. Mr hamster, I have a crush on you too ;).
Kiss, Kiss
Author's Response: Thank you complicated. I hope not to bore readers with business details but it's very much part of their lives now. Mr. Hamster is blushing and dreaming what he would do to you in person.
Hamster kisses back!
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 41: Think with your dip stick, Jimmy.
I like how Brian thinks. No wany will he lose hiring the people now. That commerical is great; loved how you used it in the story. The ending sex was nice too. More please.
Author's Response: A smart businessman does risk analysis about anything like an expansion. I love that commerical too. Before I knew it the chapter was over so I added a little sex at the end as promised. The next chapter opens with Brian and Justin. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 41: Think with your dip stick, Jimmy.
that is some great vision of brian part for the expansion of kinnetic and good will of vanguards employees and vendors
Author's Response: Brian didn't get to be successful by hurting people. He's wise and fair. Thank you alys for commenting.
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