Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2012 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 39: Read All About It !
I never did like Vance Gardner
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 39: Read All About It !
GREAT chapter. Enjoyed the article.
Wonderful plans for the future.
Author's Response: Thanks Susan! It was a fun chapter to write and brought the story into perspective. Happy to see you still with me.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 39: Read All About It !
Brian should patent his panic attack solution/motivational coaching. Worked wonders on Sunshine :)
So glad Jerry's divorce has been finalized, now he can move on with his life.
Boy, did they put the screws to Vance, he should know better than to not read the entire agreement. Then again, he was dumb enough to fire Brian...so there you go.
So glad I got the hamster spinning again! Go hamster, go hamster!! Hugz to you too!!
Author's Response: Brian knows his boy and how to pull him out of a funk and wind his clock for the day. Jerry gets to stay rich by being smart. His wife could have taken half his estate. Vance was panicking and feels the effect of sinking in the drain.
When I don't get reviews for a chapter I lose my motivation and inspiration; I can't write and yes, your review stopped my block and sent me back to the keyboard with Mr. Hamster spinning out new ideas. Know how very important for the story your reviews are. Thank you!
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 39: Read All About It !
Loved reading the Business Section. Really fun. Can you just imagine one of your family members' names across a building like that? Very surreal. Although I can sympathize with J and his reaction. Thank goodness for B and the private CEO bathroom! I like how the ground each other.
Jerry has tied up his personal loose ends and has ensured Mark's future as well. Nice.
Bwahaha! But really, if Vance didn't read the whole contract, no wonder he's in the situation he now finds himself. B was right, he was lousy at the business side. The way Mel was reacting though I'm thinking she got more than even B is expecting.
Really great! Can't wait (and I don't have to *g*) to read the next...
Author's Response: Glad I took that Journalism 101 class years ago; helped me write that chapter. That restroom is well worth the investment putting it in for B and J. Jerry had the goods on his wife so she gets next to nothing in the divorce. Vance will survive his ordeal after they get done raping him dry. Enjoy the next chapter. You're right; Mel breaks it off in him.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 39: Read All About It !
Melanie is terrible. What a woman ! I love the way you develop the character and when she’s on good terms with Brian and Justin
Excellent new chapter
Big love
Author's Response: Mel's a pussycat with teeth like a shark! Bought a new mouse and computer happy now; answering reviews again.
Love back!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 39: Read All About It !
Love it!
Author's Response: I have to save the future lines for later; the hamster is starting to overamp on me he's so high now!
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 39: Read All About It !
Great chapter; loved the news items. The love scene in the bathroom was hot. The attorney getting her attorney against Mrs. Griffin priceless. And end it with Mel eating Vance alive. Classic good writing and very entertaining JT.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it; thank you!
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 39: Read All About It !
I love when they are Machiavellian. They are terrifying... I love it so much !
Jerry and Mark are progressing very well on their side too.
Brian is right, Vance is an idiot in business…Always read contracts before signing
Great job,
I love the stress management method used by Brian… ;)
Love you
Gehexan
Author's Response: Thank you Gehexan; Justin gets this weird look on his face and Brian knows that look when Justin needs grounding. You don't spend most of 5 years loving someone and not get to know them. Vance assumed Mel was his lawyer and watching his best interest; more about the fall of Vangard in future chapters. I'm so grateful for your reviews Gehexan.
Love you too!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 39: Read All About It !
Yahooooo!!! What a news to start a new day.
Hmmm. With no degree what so ever, I always read (quick reading, just to make sure) everything in order whenever people want my signature. I believe in logic. You can't never trust (100%) people. One of my rule is 'don't let people make you do things you don't want too' (just like Brian).
LOVEEEEEEE the scene in the bathroom.
Great chapter, JT.
Author's Response: Thank you! That was an important chapter for the future of the story in many ways to be revealed later. A quickie in the CEO bathroom is always a welcome moment for our lovers to enjoy or to reset their spirits for the day's challenges.
Thanks so much for your comments.
Reviewer: jay (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2009 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 39: Read All About It !
Loved this chapter and the story. Can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the great writing
Jay
Author's Response: What? No bleeding heart for poor little Vance and Vangard? Hehehe! Thank you very much for letting me know jay. Even Brian doesn't know yet what Mel did to Vance. You're going to LOVE IT!
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 39: Read All About It !
great chapters. really enjoying this story. glad jerry got away from a wife like that, ditto that vance's clients brian picked up. love jennifer's tirade to her ex boss 'channeling brian'
Author's Response: My bad; I wrote 5 chapters last night. The hamster was snorting some good crank (reviews or meth for my plot hamster) and his ideas were pouring out. Thank you very much for reviewing alys. Reader's comments make me write way better.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 39: Read All About It !
hehehe , i love a devious mel,brian, justin.. its nice to see her getting along so well with brian now. it's about time i say... great chapter..
can't wait to see what happens when michael or lindsay find out whats going on?
Author's Response: Whew! Four chapters this time. I might have to sleep soon. Thank you very much for your review; I too love it when their horns come out to play. You gave me an idea for Michael. Lindsay's lost on meds and too far away. Brian and Mel are a dangerous team to come up against. If I wanted to steal the universe I'd hire a dyke Jewish lawyer too! Hehehehe! I mean that as high praise for Mel.
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