Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 34: Rodeo Drive

Mark sure got lucky. Emmett gives good advice. Love the parts with Gus.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 34: Rodeo Drive

Another fun chapter. I like the back & forth between Jerry/Mark & Brian/Justin.

Gus is so cute, GROOVY! Always nice when he's in the "scenes!"

I'm liking Tony. Good advice Em gave him.

Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm delighted you liked the chapter. I hoped to add detail to make it interesting.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 34: Rodeo Drive

That picture makes me miss living in L.A.!! Great advice from Auntie Em, I'm glad Tony admits that he misses Mark and regrets what he did.

OK, so like I was totally saying something about Jerry being honest and how doing so would be fair to his wife. Then like you totally threw in the little item of her getting it on with the pool boy. Yea, don't feel bad for her anymore, the kids yea, but the fact that she was happy about the divorce...Jerry is better off.

Gus saying groovy was too cute. Loved their family Sunday brunch.

Author's Response:
Who could miss living in the Jungle? I'd miss living in Malibu maybe. I lived in San Diego for 8 years and loved it. I visited LA many times with friends in the Hills. Back then a round trip ticket on PSA was only $35. Jerry was ready to leave her without Mark in his life; this made his rebound positive and good. He found the love of his life and they'll be very happy together.

Gus is adorable. He's going to be a real heart breaker when he gets older.

Thanks so much for your great comments Kat.

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 34: Rodeo Drive

Both couples had very fine wake up calls.

I laughed when Gus said groovy. It is so strange hearing such an old expression coming from a five year old isn't it? I had my moment with a friends little boy (6 yrs old) who kept saying 'far out man'. Positively gave me flashbacks! *g*

Mark is getting the royal treatment, must be nice to have everything Armani.

I so love Aunti Em and her sage advice to Tony, it was spot on.

Well, Jerry had to expect Mark would be asking for this at some point. And he took it rather well, we'll see how he does with the real thing!

On to the next chapter...

Author's Response:
Kids will parrot what they hear so much. Gus is a chatterbox now. Armani is good stuff; it last forever even if it is expensive. Emmett is the country sage of Liberty Avenue. Jerry will love his first time with Mark on top. Enjoy!

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 34: Rodeo Drive

Wow ! What a wonderful life for Mark ! I hope he won’t change and be big-headed after. He’s so cute...

I love these moments between Brian, Justin and Gus..

I enjoyed reading this. It was very pleasant

Kisses

Author's Response:
I've been to Rodeo Drive in Beverly Hills CA. It's amazing there.

Kisses back!

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 34: Rodeo Drive

Awesome!

Author's Response:
Thank you so much dear for the hits. I've almost finished another chapter and you have lifted my spirits so much!

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 34: Rodeo Drive

Love when Aunt Em always give a good advice. What a new life for Mark.

Good Chapter.

Author's Response:
Thank you for saying that complicated. I feared the readers weren't happy with this chapter when nobody reviewed it at first. It was important to get some new details out there for the storyline.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 34: Rodeo Drive

beautiful update. :-)) rose

Author's Response:
Thanks rose, I needed to hear that; really.

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 34: Rodeo Drive

Sorry, I got behind for awhile, but I'm caught up now, and I'm enjoying this story. Again, thanks for the updates. Your original character development is intriguing, and I love watching (reading) B/J handle plot twists together without their togetherness (or not togetherness) being the plot twist. I hope that makes sense, but if not, know that you are writing a type of story that I really enjoy!

Author's Response:
Thanks Kate. I agree with you; there are so many fanfiction QAF stories out there dealing with the relationship of B&J it approaches ad naseum status. I'm more interested in them being a team against the world and good friends to their families and associates. I hope to get the next chapter out to night. I'll start it once I'm caught up on answering reviews I was lucky enough to get while I was asleep.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 34: Rodeo Drive

jerry is certainly in for a fun night. tony gets closure and brian gets his family to play with his trains. what could be a better way to spend a sunday.

Author's Response:
Thank you sjmpets3 for your review and comment. Although a transistion chapter it was loaded with new details necessary for the storyline later. I'm very grateful for your review on this chapter.

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 34: Rodeo Drive

Well, a great chapter. I really enjoyed it. So, go Jerry, experience...

Rodeo Drive, oh... I don't know why, I can't help but at this moment and this time, some word sounds erotically... Yeehaa !

Mark is really cute

Grooviest update !!!

With so much love

Gehexan

PS : Now, bed + youthfulness + imagination + a beautiful man sleeping = a marvellous and long night ! Bye-bye

Author's Response:
Thank you Gehexan. I hope you had a good night's sleep too. Thanks for commenting on this chapter. It had lots of details necessary for the story to develop.

Hugs!

Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 34: Rodeo Drive

Love this story. Was a little confused about Wal-Mart, (not where most billionaires shop), then I realized most of them are open 24/7. Sleep fast. Write more. Please.

Author's Response:
Excellent deduction Lorie. No other store selling boys/mens clothes late at night is open except Wal-Mart. Mark was wearing the clothes on his back or a plum colored tux. The house keeping staff got his suit and his measurements and got him a set of clothes to go shopping in on Rodeo Drive the next day. Thanks so much for reviewing this chapter.

Reviewer: SugarBear (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 34: Rodeo Drive

Can you please tell me what "trell" means and where it comes from? Is it a slang term? I am interested because I have never heard or seen that word before reading your stories.

Author's Response:
I just Googled it: trell:

beautiful, attractive, admirable, alluring, angelic, appealing, beauteous, bewitching, charming, classy, comely, cute, dazzling, delicate, delightful, divine, elegant, enticing, excellent, exquisite, fair, fascinating, fine, foxy*, good-looking, gorgeous, graceful, grand, handsome, ideal, lovely, magnificent, marvelous, nice, pleasing, pretty, pulchritudinous, radiant, ravishing, refined, resplendent, shapely, slightly, splendid, statuesque, stunning, sublime, superb, symmetrical, taking, well-formed, wonderful, adorable, agreeable, beau, beckoning, captivating, enchanting, engaging, enthralling, fetching, glamorous, interesting, inviting, looker*, luring, magnetic, mesmeric, pleasant, prepossessing, provocative, seductive, tantalizing, teasing, tempting, winning, winsome, acceptable, effective, enhancing, neat, presentable, seemly, tasteful, welcome, well-chosen

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2009 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 34: Rodeo Drive

you update so soon every day thanks for that!!! and i also love to read about all of the people in this story not just Justin and Brian it is just like in Embraced LOVE it.

HUgs Buffytess

Author's Response:
Thanks Buffytess. This was a weird chapter; you have heavy gay code many readers may not appreciate unless gay males; i.e. the code to break down the defenses of a new gay man to become a bottom for the first time. I wish I had a dime every time I used those lines and they worked! Then we have the parallel metaphor of Rodeo Drive and the fact that getting a virgin to take it up the rear is like a rodeo contest roping a calf mentally. And a smaller metaphor of the beautiful boy Mark followed by Gus; both innocent and precious on two different levels. I wanted to take the chance with this review to help others see some of what that chapter held. There is hope I'm not truly insane if you can understand Me. hehehehehe

Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2009 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 34: Rodeo Drive

LMGAO !!! Fun chapter. Your LA facts are perfect.

Author's Response:
Thanks Dave for commenting. It was an important plot chapter in a way. The story would get boring if it was only a constant chain of smut and cliff hangers. Having been to Rodeo Drive made it easy to write about; it's really a fantastic place to visit.

I'm getting tired and will have to sleep soon before writing the next chapter soon.

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