Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2019 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 33: Wedding Night
Brian is taking well to married life.
Author's Response: Yes he is. After practicing for so many years, things are the same.
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Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2014 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 33: Wedding Night
OMG that was HOT
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thank you for reading and comment Tash.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 33: Wedding Night
Love the Mark's new home. Glad you didn't write about Debbie and Carl's honeymoon.
Author's Response: Please forgive my very late response. I wasn't doing very well when this review was done - found out later I had a heart condition but that's all fixed today. Thank you YumYumPM.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 33: Wedding Night
I worked as an architects assistant for 13 years and this is one gorgeous home.
Author's Response: I'm so ashamed to have missed this review. I was under the weather back them but it's history today.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 33: Wedding Night
Once again, enjoyed!
A nice, fun chapter. Very sweet.
Also, nice house. Is that an actual house or from a designing program, computer generated?
Author's Response: Thanks Susan. On the house I really don't know; I found it under Google image search and loved it. I can't tell if the picture is CGI or a photo.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 33: Wedding Night
What an amazing life for both couples. I guess Jerry really did fall in love at first sight. I really hope he and Mark will be happy together.
I knew Brian and Justin's first time without condoms would be special.
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked this chapter. Jerry is having the love of his life and Mark could not have landed a better man too. Tony will be ok later; you'll see. Brian and Justin are forever committed to no condoms again. It's that goooooood! Thanks Kat.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 33: Wedding Night
Hotness all around!
I love that house, but somehow I bet I'd love its view more...
On to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hello again! Just woke up to find a ton of reviews; wonderful! So happy to see you reading today.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 33: Wedding Night
I spent all yesterday afternoon shopping with my hubby and children. I love to go round the stores and spend his money… I bought lots of clothes for Txabi and Maïa (mini bodies so tendency with a humourous and tender short note on it like ‘beautiful like mom’, ‘Beauty Queen’… I love it). It was a wonderful day but very exhausting. So today, I’m resting around the pool and I read your so splendid story
Our two couples are happy and I’m happy too for them… Love without barriers, it’s so fabulous… My older brother and his partner are also in this case and I wish the same for Gexan and Tomás
Very nice chapter
Big love
Author's Response: Thank you for the Twitter update on your shopping. A new baby can be so much fun and work at the same time. I am so honored you're reading my story and reviewing each chapter.
Big big love back!
~JT
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 33: Wedding Night
That was double HOT, thanks. Will there be a chapter Justin and Mark topping? mmmm ... goes quickly to the next chapter
Author's Response: I know I've written Mark topping, maybe Justin too; I'm not sure. I'll try to remember this for future chapters. Very much appreciate your reviews Marny.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 33: Wedding Night
Excellente!
Author's Response: Your are such a sweet heart Vikinglass24 and the hamster is going wild snorting your lines.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 33: Wedding Night
Two very hot couples, twice as many sex scenes and an excellent writter...Personally, it suits me very well
Great hot chapter
Kisses
Gehexan
Author's Response: Thank you very much Gehexan for your reviews. My latest chapter hasn't been received well and you've lifted my spirits. I'll have to sleep soon and write more later. I hope following the two couples in love will be entertaining. I enjoyed writing them.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 33: Wedding Night
hope mark and jerry stay together. now round 2, justin's turn..... bring it on
Author's Response: Thanks alys. There'll be two blond boys climbing on top tonight! One has to break in a frightened blushing virgin too.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 33: Wedding Night
hot hot hot
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad I passed the hotness meter to your pleasure! Thanks for letting me know. More duel loving to follow now.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 33: Wedding Night
hmm interesting chapter. i liked it. mark and jerry are going a bit tad fast aren't they? oh well as long as jerry doesn't hurt mark...
can't wait to see what happens next..
Author's Response: Take it from a mid fifties gay man; we fall in love very fast; and sadly can fall out of love just as fast. Both Jerry and Mark were ready for next and went to each other like two opposite poled magnets. That was more like real gay life then you might know. Thank you for reviewing Lesley.
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 33: Wedding Night
that was sooo hhhoooottttt!!!!!!!!! thanks for the fast update.
Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: You're very welcomed Buffytess. Thanks for the review.
Hugs Back!
Reviewer: kwil (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 33: Wedding Night
Thank you thank you thank you :D :D :D
This chapter was super hooooooooooot !!! Really liked the idea of Mark & Jerry as a couple.... You Rocks!
Author's Response: Thanks kwil. We have two hot couples to follow now.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 33: Wedding Night
HOT!! HOT!! HOT!! Nothing but good stuff. If only I have someone to do some loving too.
Excellent!
Love you.
Author's Response: Thanks complicated. I love you! Thanks for commenting and reviewing.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 33: Wedding Night
I sooooo love this story. :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thanks rose! I hope it tickled your sweet spot.
Reviewer: lori (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 33: Wedding Night
All I can say is ,"Wonderful".
Author's Response: Thanks lori; we now have two hot gay couples to follow.
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