Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2019 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 31: Reception
I think that Deb inviting Joan wasn't the best of moves.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 31: Reception
It's a good thing that Joan was smart enough to behave herself. The wedding was lovely, and the reception out of this world.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 31: Reception
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE!!!!!!
Wonderful chapter. I'm hopeful for Joan.
(Fingers crossed I'll be able to read a couple more chaps over the wkend!)
Author's Response: Boy I slept for days. Thanks Susan for commenting. Joan is ok the rest of the story.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 31: Reception
Thank goodness Debbie held the reigns on Joan! I will say Saint Joan did behave herself for the most part and I'm glad she got to see how successful and happy Brian is and to see the home he and Justin have created for themselves with the family.
Author's Response: Joan knew Brian had money but she had no idea how much or how stable he was with a family and all. She adored Gus and will behave to see him. Thanks for reviewing Kat; I love to read your comments.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 31: Reception
Well, Deb made up for inviting Joan by giving her the grand tour and some words of wisdom to think about.
Great chapter. On to the next...
Author's Response: I love Debbie and Joan needed to change if she wants to be around her grandchild.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 31: Reception
"God does not make mistakes. They are gay because he made them gay." OMG, I love this sentence. It makes me almost cry. If you are Ok, I'll borrow it from you...
So no problem with Joan, super ! But Jerry, what evil !!!!.. Ah, love ....
Great Job, JT
Author's Response: The phrase is from Rev. Troy Perry; founder of M.C.C. churches worldwide. It's the largest gay Christian organization in the world. He and his lover were once close friends of mine in the 70s. He's a very inspiring man. Jerry is cool; you'll see. This is the best thing that can happen to Mark.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 31: Reception
Great chapter. I hope Jerry is happy in the end.
Author's Response: Welcome back girlfriend! Me and the hamster missed you much. He's jonesing for your lines and hopping up and down now seeing them. We been writing!
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 31: Reception
Yeah, Debbie puts on a show for Joan... « God does not make mistakes. They are gay because he made them gay. », I hope this sentence can reach the brain of this woman. Fortunally, no fuss here...
At first, I admit I saw the couple Mark/Tony like Terry/David. And then, when Jerry speaks with Brian, it became an obvious fact, it was crystal clear, it will be Jerry/Mark (*grin*)
Excellent
Author's Response: Thank you Gehexan for commenting. Sometimes we move those hot coals around to keep the gay flame burning brighter.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 31: Reception
OMG. I miss out this chapter, I forgot what the last chapter I read. (this is show how fast you update, JT. Thank you.)
Joan... Joan... Joan.... She better learn to accept who Brian is if she know what is good for her.
* welcome back Ihintza & congrat for new baby.
Hugs.
Author's Response: Thank you complicated for reviewing this chapter. Joan will be reevaluating her feelings if she wants to see Gus again. Enjoy the new chapters and let me know if you like them.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 31: Reception
maybe joan's thoughts are about to change some. it would do her some good. it nice that she can see that brian has love in him and around him no thanks to her. who was that tear for. her son and the way he was raised or herself because she can't change him?
hm, just what is jerry planning to do? funny how joan thought that mark was with brian because he's blond yet jerry seems to have a things for blonds too.
Author's Response: The next chapter going up right now will tell you Jerry's intentions quite clearly sjmpets3. Joan has to accept the great success Brian has and in her mind God has blessed him greatly despite her feelings. Thank you very much for reviewing.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 31: Reception
great chapter.. typical joan, never learns to keep her big mouth shut.. i am totally loving this story..
Author's Response: Thank you very much Lesley for your kind review. I'm posting a new chapter now.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 31: Reception
Very interesting talk between Debbie and Joan, Mark must be some fox to make a grown married man ready to leave his family. Looking forward to where this is going. Your stories have so much real gay life details.
Author's Response: Thanks Dave for reviewing. Joan is learning more than she can handle so fast. Jerry is totally taken by Mark's beauty and in so many words he told Brian he would leave his wife and family for such a boy; how very real gay world that is ... too.
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