Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2020 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 21: Lily
OK Now I am shocked Yaa for Justin, poor Brian did not see this one coming
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. It does my heart good to see this older epic story still being read.
bob
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2019 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 21: Lily
It's amazing how much Justin is willing to help Michael, while Brian would rather leave him to his fate. Gus might like to help with the wedding. I'd forgotten about Lily and Justin making a brother for Gus.
Author's Response: How could I miss this review? Thank you YumYumPM.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2012 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 21: Lily
Amazing how everything turns out.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 21: Lily
Finally able to read some more & LOVING this chapter!
I like how everything seems to be falling into place.
Nice little surprise/shock there w/ Lily!
Oh, congrats on over a THOUSAND reviews!! I was hoping it would happen w/ Embrace, glad it's happened now.
**side note: I WAS confused there for a moment w/ Lily & the other story of yours I'm reading w/ Justin's destiny of having a child! You said it wouldn't happen & I knew at some point it would! He-he....**
OK, off to the next chapter.....
Author's Response: My plot bunny Mr. Hamster dares you to stay awake all night and catch up with him. You only have a few chapters to go. *grins* So good to see you reading again. Thank you for the congrats for the 1,000+ reviews. I'm honored by my readers very much. This was a good thing for MW too as it shows this publishing site is becoming more popular in volume of hits. Enjoy the story and thank you so much for your chapter reviews Susan. Could we dare hit 2,000? OMG!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 21: Lily
Another great chapter! That is so like Justin to want to help Michael, he has such a huge heart.
So Lily is to be the woman who gives Brian and Justin a baby!! I was wondering who it was going to be.
My goodness, moved three weeks ago, finally back online and you've posted like 40 more chapters! Got alot to catch up on :)
Author's Response: Mr. Hamster has a major crush on reader/reviewer complicated and he has been spinning the plot ideas like crazy. I'm so happy to see you back; moving is such a hassle and I'm glad you're over it. Fanfiction is so much more fun than RL anyway!
Hugs!
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 21: Lily
So Chris gets equal justice physically, however he will never know who did this to him. Kind of on par with Chris only getting community service.
Michael still getting a helping hand and from the person he tried to harm no less. Well, J is a sweetie, but please don't make him a pushover.
I can easily visualize Em and Deb decorating...whatever they come up with you know the kids at least will love it. Lol
And now Vic's prophecy is coming to fruition, we've met Lily. Oh, I can hardly wait!
Another goody! On to the next...
Author's Response: There is a sub-theme to Chris being attacked soon to be noticable later in the novel. Justin will become a daddy with Lily now.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 21: Lily
Justin shows great kindness. He has a true magnanimity. It's so him. Bravo ! I LOVE THIS MAN (but not a word to my hubby ok !)
Welcome to the future mother. Lily seems to be a wonderful person
Excellent chapter
Love
Author's Response: Thank you! Father Justin is one of my favorite plot themes. He's perfect raising a child. Who wouldn't want him for a daddy; and Brian too? I'm redundant but I do appreciate every review very much.
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