Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2019 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 20:What Were You Thinking?
Things look great for our guys except for Gus not wanting them to marry. But you can't blame him. It's interesting how Michael thinks. He really does need medical help.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2012 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 20:What Were You Thinking?
The new move to the new location is interesting and then the mystery of Chris Hobbs takes it up a notch. Maybe michael is ready for something good to happen in his life. Poor Gus, worried that marriage will change things. Unfortunately sometimes it does.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 20:What Were You Thinking?
Now J feels he's truly an equal partner in Kinnetik. B may not like it when he finds out, but as J said, he can handle B. Lol
Great idea for David to be a model and I love the slogan!
Aww, poor Gus! I'm so glad he has such loving people surrounding and supporting him.
Michael, what a dweeb.
On to the next...
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it cakdg. The story is unfolding rapidly now.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 20:What Were You Thinking?
Poor little Gus, I hope Debbie will talk to Brian and Justin about it.
I can't stop reading, it's such a good story.
Author's Response: I'm so grateful for all your reviews Marny. Gus is strong and will be ok. It's a good thing he talks about it. You honor me saying you can't stop reading.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 20:What Were You Thinking?
You're too good of a writer. You're making me want the police to catch & punish whom ever hurt Chris because of his father. You're also making me feel bad for Michael. Stop it! (Ha-ha)
Another great chap. Love Gus, sad but true how kids connect the dots & the results they come up with, spot on!
Enjoyed Terry & David. Really happy for David.
Exciting times ahead.
Author's Response: I have to give credit to the hamster in my head spinning out the plot details as I channel his thoughts on the keyboard. Spoiler: eventually Chris will recover; a long way in the future. Thank you so much for commenting Susan.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2009 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 20:What Were You Thinking?
Oh, Gus! Poor little thing. I feel really sorry for him here. Child abuse left deep marks. OMG, I swear, if I had Lindsay in front of me now, damn ...
Michael is finally aware of his stupidity, there is maybe a little bit of hope
I loved it
You are wonderful
Yet big kisses
Author's Response: I can't say how grateful I am for your chapter reviews Ihintza. Gus will recover; promise. Kids can bounce back in amazing ways. Michael hit bottom and has no way to go but up; however, he has some people to face soon.
Big Kisses Back to a favorite reader!
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