Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2019 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
The family is growing. Glad Angel gave Michael what he needed. lol.
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2019 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
Darn Michael, Brian should left him in prison
Author's Response: They did have some good history besides this f__k up happening. Fools and kids get second chances.
b
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2018 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
I wonder how long it will be before Angel delivers that beat down on wittle Mikey's ignorant ungrateful carcass?
Author's Response: He gets a promotion before that happens.
bob
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2012 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
This is going to be the wedding of the century.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
This is your world and you run it.
However, in the real world, Blade is the franchise that brought Marvel Comics into the realm of blockbuster movies.
Author's Response: Where do you come off with a line like "this is your world and you run it?" I made no mention of the first major hits by Marvel. It isn't relavant to my story. The Marvel films Blade and X-Men demonstrated that blockbuster films could be made out of comic book characters not familiar to the general public.
Yes, Blade was the first major hit. Thanks for the trivia and for commenting. I'm a huge fan of Blade myself.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
Looks like Terry's a real go-getter. I like the addition of Terry & David to the gang.
Michael is such a child, a selfish and stupid one at that.
And the wedding plans continue...
Loved it! To the next chapter.
Author's Response: I enjoyed writing up to the wedding very much. Hope you like where I take the story.
Author's Response: I enjoyed writing up to the wedding very much. Hope you like where I take the story.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
Love the new family, especially Angel for punching Michael in the face.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting. Angel is man and a boy. He's very talented too but very street wise. He has a great future now with our favorite lovers helping him.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
Ok, the fish is still alive... I can go back to the story while my little sweetheart breastfeeding. So Terry and David are invited in the family. I'm so happy for these boys...`
Good one, Brian. Michael deserved the punch. He's so stupid.
Very beautiful chapter
Big hugs
Author's Response: Thanks Ihintza. The Liberty Avenue family is growing and changing some what.
Hugs Back!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you Vikinglass24; I love you for loving it too!
Hugs!
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
Hey, another great chapter. I like Terry and David. I also like that your Brian can look and appreciate without immediately fucking. "Pretend that the owner of Marvel Comics might see it" made me laugh. Nice.
Author's Response: Thanks Kat. Justin didn't want to put too much pressure on Angel with the assignment.
Reviewer: The annoyed reader (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
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“Heah Angel.”
“Brian, Michael just called Mel. What do I do with him?”
“Walk up to him and punch him in the nose hard.” Angel walked up to Michael and slugged him in the face real hard.
“What the fuck!” Michael’s nose started to bleed.
“Done Brian. His nose in now bleeding.”
“Next time he fucks up. Beat him down. Let him know I ordered it.”
Is this supposed to be funny or are you really seeing Brian this way?
Author's Response: If you recall from the QAF show when Justin showed up with Ethan at the girl's party; Brian punched him in the head. When Michael gets stupid the only way to stop him is violence. Too much is at stake to put up with Michael's shit. Yes, I see Brian doing this or I wouldn't have written it. Getting his ass kicked is sometimes the only thing Michael understands.
Reviewer: Stellakinney (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
I'm worried about Michael and Lindsey, why you let them go out from jail? Please stop them, better kill them like Sap and Big Ed
Author's Response: Thanks for your comment and question Stellakinney. The future of Lindsay and Michael is yet to be revealed; the story has a long way to go. Lots can happen from now to then.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
You make my day. After almost accident going home today (some idiot driver cut me without signal & so suddenly) reading your story make me feel better.
I like it so much when Angle follow Brian order. What an immature, pitiful, ungreatful, stupid (the list so long & I am shaking my head) Mikey is.
Thank you so much for super fast update!!! Kiss, kiss, kiss!!!
Author's Response: Thanks complicated for your comments. Sorry about your near accident. I hope to have a new chapter up tonight.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
Another great chapter!! Love Terry and David, think they are a great addition to the family. I also agree that its nice to see my fellow minorities represented (in a good way) in fan fiction.
What a great project for Angel, he'll do really well in it. I found a link on Wikipedia with a huge list of black superhereos, including Green Lantern who I grew up watching. Here's the link in case you want to check it out for research. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_black_superheroes
I can't believe Michael would risk not only his life (*eye roll*), Angel, Justin, Mel and Jenny's. IDIOT!
Author's Response: Thank you very much Kat for your review and comments. I'm loving the new characters too. For my story I'm pretending there are no black super heros. Since Sap and Big Ed are gone; nobody is in danger anymore; they just don't want Michael around so aren't telling him that.
Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
That last line was a cute play on words from the bible lol love the story update soon. I can't wait.
Author's Response: Thanks Ashley. Honestly, I wasn't even thinking about God's comment after the Creation when I wrote that; it just came out of me. I now remember it after you mentioned it.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
excellant excellant. love that angel slugged mikie, and ratted on him. love terry and david. wonder what kind of dress deb and sunshine will wear LOL
Author's Response: Thanks alys for reviewing. Sometimes the only thing Michael understands is a fist. Justin will be wearing a blue tux but Debbie had to get her dig in there.
Reviewer: kwil (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
Fantasticccc!!!!!!
New members added to the family. Cool...
Author's Response: Thanks kwil. I"m excited about the new members of the Liberty family too.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
mikey pleeeease call your mother....oo better yet call ben & hunter pleeeease, so angel can beat you down.. :)
finaly a qaf story with some educated black / spanish gay folks.... Brovo :D 2 thums up. woo hoo. :D
Author's Response: Thanks nicole; a reader gave me the idea for diversity and I loved it. Adding them is very popular. Michael will mess up; count on it.
Reviewer: Yaz (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
Too tired to say anything. But loved it. lol. Update soon :) :-) :) x
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know Yaz. A couple of words is cool and the review joins the count and motivates me to write.
Reviewer: Eniola (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
I love the Liberty family you've created. I wish I had friends/family like that in my life. The love and support comes through extemely clear. Loving Angel, Terry and David as well. Michael's proving to be dumber than dumb more and more. Maybe Angel should go ahead and give him that ass kicking now just for breathing.
Author's Response: Thanks Eniola! The addition of Terry, David and Angel is proving to be very popular. I could just kiss the nice person who gave me the idea (kiss!). Michael is beyond idiot. He will soon shit in his mess kit good.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
ya hoo loved this chapter.. it was nice to see angel punch michael in the face. michael is a whiney little asshole who needs his face smacked a few times.. its nice to see terry and his bf become one of the family..
can't wait to see what happens next..
Author's Response: Thank you Lesley for reviewing. I'm working on the next chapter tonight.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
A beautiful chapter. I enjoyed it ! I'm longing to see the wedding. The family circle is widening. Terry and David are lucky. It's all love in this group...Brian doesn't like his ex best friend anymore, it's as plain as the nose on Michael's face (oops). I know now where is the problem, this great dummy is acephalous. A good job for Angel, it's right, I can't remember a black super hero. There is the beautiful Storm (Ororo) in the Marvel's Comic books (X-men) and Lucius Best (that's a name !) - Frozone - in the Disney/Pixar motion picture «The Incredibles » (ok, this one isn't a real turn-on) but no sexy well-built beautiful man...
Ok, I go to the bed now wake up someone (who's going to grumble a little but love it)
Get some sleep too
Love,
Gehexan
Author's Response: Thank you very much Gehexan for reviewing and commenting. I had to look up:
acephalous: lacking a head or governing body.
Good one dude. I had a good long sleep and will write tonight. Thanks for hanging in there with me.
Reviewer: camm76 (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
I'm really loving this story so far! I like the new members of "the family".
I hope Michael dosen't come back and put Justin in danger. I can just see him doing that, running away from Angel and comming back to the Pitts. He really doesn't deserve to be apart of the family in any way. Despite being Debbie's son.
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks camm76. Michael would have to have a death wish to do that. Truth be known, the risk to everyone is over; they just don't want Michael around; therefore, he's keep away for as long as possible. Thank you very much for commenting.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
Wow! I've never seen a writer kick out fantastic chapters as fast as you do JT. Love the new family. Angel, Terry, David; all fabulous. Break it off in Michael. Ted for best man. Remember to get some rest dude.
Author's Response: Thanks David; I have to write when the hamster's hot. I'll sleep tonight. Thanks for your comments.
Reviewer: darkraven (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
Can't wait for the wedding. liking Angel more and more.
Author's Response: Angel is like a black version of Justin; beautiful, talented, young and destined to greatness. The wedding will be a major event.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
very nice, all of it.
welcome terry and david to the wildest family this side of the rockies.
angel got a nice break, so did michael. oops!
Author's Response: HA!!! Very well said sjmpets3; the stage is set for things to happen now with the new main characters in place. Michael may learn; someday.....
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