Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2019 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Let's hope Brian never gets caught, but it looks like Mikey won't have to worry, so I hope nobody tells him. Craig will probably do something to mess up the help Justin's giving hime.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2018 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
OMG AND YES I AM SHOUTING! Ok so, Brian's proposal to Justin was too cute for words. Then I got so scared when Big Ed and the Sap were released from prison until they received their comeuppance. But Brian serving as the judge, jury, and executioner for those two thugs blew me away. You knocked that one right out of the park.
Author's Response: Anyone who threatens his lover has a date with eternity very soon. Anyone who threatens his kids will have the same fate. And remember, the attorney also had a stake with dealing with Big Ed. And the cops must have given them the green light to clean the house. Therefore; the fastest cold case files in history.
bob
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Wow, Hunter's profitting from the comic store more than Michael ever would have. Nice touch. You're very blood thirsty in this chapter, got rid of the bad guys in one swoop.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
“I love you twat. Will you marry me Justin Taylor?” ~ Ever the romantic...
“Brian, turn off your intercom please.” ~ Oh shit is right... LOL...
Dangerous Brian and Professional Hit Men...
Later Baby ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying this story and I hope you help me make 1900 reviews soon too. Thank you!
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Two problems solved.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Hunter is making a success with the comics where Michael couldn't, are we surprised?
Linds is in counseling for sex crimes, hopefully she will also get help for the physical abuse and her alcoholism too..
It sucks to be Craig, he's getting a lesson in Business 101, B/J style.
I love the banter between B & J. Mr. Kinnetik proposed and they sealed the deal over B's desk. I loved both company-wide broadcasts, very fun.
Sap & Ed are out of the picture and B's family is safe.
Loved it! On to the next...
Author's Response: Yes things move quickly in QAF land. Too many good things coming for the crap to be in the way.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Jeahh I'm back, my holiday in Spain was a lot of fun. But now ... pfff OMG I have to read 30 chapters of "forever yours".
* runs of to read *
Author's Response: Welcome home! Enjoy the chapters. Please, pretty please, with sugar on top, write a short review for each chapter. I'll be so grateful and do a happy dance for each one. The hamsters needs the hits. Thank you!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Wow, Love can be the driving force behind the man... Brian is perfect. I loved this chapter. It was very pleasant... I loooooved the proposal. Ooohhhh... (*Sigh*) It's soooo romantic... (Excuse me but I'm a real girl and I literally feel my heart melting when there is romantism in a story...)
Ok ! Now, Craig, you belong to your son...Make the happy dance in your office, please.
Many Kisses for my favorite writter
Ps: Thank you very very much for your little message, Complicated. My bro showed me your kind words last night... Wow, I'm very touched
Author's Response: Thanks Ihintza for this review. More about Brian's involvement in future chapters. This was their second proposal since the originial wedding was cancelled in season five. Craig was another old score to settle.
Kisses Back!
Complicated is a wonderful reader and very thoughtful.
Reviewer: Lori (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Claping hard and fast here, and asking for a bow from the genius writer.
Author's Response: Takes low bow very grateful for chapter reviews applauding story so far. Thank you Lori!
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Damn it, what's fantastic chapter ! Brian, my hero. Hire a professional killer to protect Justin, that's LOVE and so Brian. And this proposal, priceless !!! « Brian, turn off your intercom please » - ROFLMAO - Cynthia waited just long enough (grin). It's so good.
Well then, I take my hat off to the hamster... Excellent. It was a pleasure to read ...
Big hugs
Gehexan
Author's Response: Thank you very much Gehexan for your great review. Protecting his Sunshine is what Brian does best. LOVE! is the power of all that happens with them. The hamster takes a bow.
Hugs Back!
Reviewer: darkraven (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
oooohhhhh!!! I love over protective Brian.
Author's Response: Me too; he is so in character this way. Enjoy the next chapters. Thanks darkraven for commenting.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Great... Justin is safe... Brian got rid of Ed and Sap... but... why doesn't he hire someone to drop a safe on Mikey's head?? It's only a matter of time before he screws everything up again!!! I think Mikey is the only person on earth whose brain is smaller than his dick !!! lol.....
Author's Response: LMGAO!!! Good one BluvsJ. You tickle me. I'm keeping Michael around for entertainment. Angel's on top of him like stink on shit.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Oh my god! That was fucking sweet. Brian got an assassin. Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting and reviewing VG24. I don't know who did it but it was to nice to save Justin. hehehehe
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
OMG!!! What a surprise. Brian Propose to Justin & everyone in the building is the witness. Fucking love Brian... he is so unpredictable. I wish I have someone to love me as much as Brian love Justin. There is no broundries when its come to Justin, he will do anything for him.
Thank you JT, you make me cry a happy cry. I am so touch ..... so happy with this chapter. Yes money screaming, but love will make people do the unbelieveable. I can't choose betewen love or money coz i want both LOL.
Very good job, keep it up. BIG HUGS for you.
Author's Response: Thank you very much complicted for being such a great fan. The love between Brian and Justin is the magic that makes them so special.
Hugs Back!
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Great update as usual thanks, update soon please.
Many Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: Thank you Buffytess for taking the time to comment. Much appreciated. More chapter very soon.
Hugs Back!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
WOW! Big Ed and Sap eliminated! Justin is safe now thank goodness and he and Brian can now get married!
LOVED the marriage proposal. Only Brian can use the term twat in a romantic tone.
Craig is a douche bag! Brian owns him...love it!
Author's Response: You write such fun reviews to read Kat. Thank you very much for it. I'm motivated now to create another chapter real fast for you great reviewers. My mental hamster is spinning on his wheel in overdrive.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
big ed, gone. sap, gone. craig, hanging by a thread. michael going to jail for a year. lindsay in canada for four years. all is good in the taylor-kinney household.
Author's Response: Thank you very much sjmpets3 for your great review and comment. I love happy stories with justice served hot and cold.
Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
OMG! I can't believe Brian hired a hit man....whait a moment...what am I saying? Of corse I can believe that. Anything to keep his Sunshine safe. I still love it and fucking craig taylor over always makes me happy! Can't wait for more chapters!
Author's Response: Thanks Ashley for this chapter review. Each review for a chapter motivates me to write for you fast and good. Anybody who is remotely a threat to Justin is not long for this world. Craig has one chance to save his ass. I hope to have the next chapter up real soon.
Reviewer: inkedkelt (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Hell yeah!! Now if Michael and Lindsey would just both drop dead I would be a happy camper. But I have a feeling we haven't seen the last of those two. Keep up the great work. I look forward to future chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you very much inkedkelt for your review and comments for this chapter. I truly appeciate your reviewing each chapter very much. Justin's safety is Brian's primary concern and anyone who could hurt him is toast. I hope to have the next chapter up very soon and I'll start writing it once I catch up answering reviews.
Reviewer: BlindDreamer (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Dont fuck with Brians boy man, haha, that was so great, was seriously not expecting that. The marriage proposal was too cute! Just awesome, great work!
Author's Response: Thank you very much BlindDreamer for this review. Readers who review each chapter are my best readers who inspire me to write good and fast. Anyone who could hurt Justin is not long for this world. Justin's dream is to marry Brian and the dark haired lover will give his blond boy anything. Thanks for your compliment very much.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
oh thank the lord, justin is safe.. now lets move on to dipshit michael and molester lindsay and see what happenes there.. i hope brian and justin get justice served there as well... love this story..
Author's Response: Thank you very much Lesley for your outstanding review for this chapter. I can't say how important your chapter reviews are for me to write good for you. Brian will move mountains to keep Justin safe. I hope to have another chapter up for you soon.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Laaaawd another laaate night reading a excalent chapter..
Craig better get to work lol. the killing of sap and big ed priceless.
i wonder who will be brian's best man at the wedding... ooo better yet what if mikey shows up at the wedding ooo :)
Author's Response: Thanks nicole for reviewing. How about I let the readers help me pick a best man; who do you like?
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Damn this was a great chapter JT. The action was amazing and so real. Brian is not somebody to mess with where Jusitn is concerned. Thanks for the fast update.
Author's Response: Thank you very much David for reviewing again. I hope to have your next fix ready real soon.
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