Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2019 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
Michael screws up and still Justin helps him. Carl gets fussed at for getting shot how is that fair.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2018 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
I didn't see this one coming. I'm glad the guys sprang Michael. Angel has his work cut out for him.
Author's Response: Knowing Michael he's going to mess this up. Their will be more to that part of the story soon. Thank you very much for the chapter comments. Truly.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
Poor Angel. Having to keep track of Mikey. Somehow I can't imagine Michael coming out good in all this.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
Well it's better than jail with Big Ed, and being burnt at the stake and shredded by werewolf's... ha, ha, ha
Later Baby ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: I had some very strong crack when I wrote Embraced!
:)
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
Well, if I had a mustache I'd be positively twirling it! I loved Jenn's conversation with Craig, thank you for that. What was it B once told J (just before he got in with the Pink Posse), the best way to piss off the straights was to be a big fat success, or something to that affect anyway. Yeah baby!
I had to laugh and inhaled my water wrong when Deb asked Carl when he could fuck again! LOL
So, then my metaphorical mustache drooped reading about Michael and everyone pulling out all the stops not to mention $$ to help him again. Well, I'm glad B punched him, hope it knocked some sense in to him, but somehow I doubt it. I also think he will screw up again (I mean how can he not, he's had so much practice).
Another good one, on to the next and probably my last for the evening..er morning now (unless you left me with another cliffhanger).
Author's Response: You're in luck; chapter 12 isn't a cliff hanger and should leave you in a good mood for dreaming B and J action on a white bear skin rug in front of a raging fire. Thank you for commenting so much.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2009 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
I love Jennifer with her former husband. It is a pleasure to see Craig confronted with as many wealth.
Michael put Justin's life at risk again. It's really so stupid. Brian takes the new seriously and he is right. Angel, finally, seems to be a good character. The poor, stuck with a such millstone...
I loved this chapter. You're a very good story-teller
Author's Response: It's not too much of a spoiler to tell you I like happy endings but sometimes it's a rough road to get there. Thank you!
Reviewer: Lori (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
OMG, love this twist. Craig needs to kiss Justin's feet lol. Can not wait untill the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know. Every review is important to me. Enjoy the story Lori.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
Good chapter!
Can imagine the look on Craig's face when Jennifer broke it down for him!
I wasn't expecting the letter from Angel. Love the Mr. Kinnetik!
Glad Brian & Justin still have compassion towards Michael. I'm probably on my owe w/ this but I'm glad Michael is safe now. Although, knowing him, I'm sure he's going to do something stupid but seems like Angel will keep him in ck.
Oh, forgot to mention in review for last chapter, love the double wedding idea at Britin. Looking forward to it.
Author's Response: Thank you very much Susan for your comments and review. Craig was floored to say the least. Honestly Brian helped Michael for Justin's sake. Michael can be counted on messing up soon. I like the double wedding too. We have Christmas first.
Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
that's priceless justin is a millionaire, and craig got ....nothing
Michael ..... he's just so so soooo stupid
Author's Response: Thanks monica; I really do appreciate you reviewing each chapter. More about Craig in the next chapter going up right now!
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
Love this story so much ..
Pff and now I must wait 2 weeks before I can read again. I'm going on holiday .. driving through Spain and sleeping in paradors.
Hope there are many chapters to read when I come back.
* big hug *
Author's Response: Thank you very much Marny for your kind review. I'm certain I'll do much writing in two weeks. I envy you; I've never been to Spain before; have a great time.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
Great chapter! Really liking Angel, he's a smart guy. Just sending that letter saved Justin's life. If they had stayed in prison Michael would have stuck his foot in his soon to be toothless mouth again.
Highlights of the story: Jenn rubbing Craig's face all up in the fact that his son is a millionaire...without his help or his alma mater. AND Brian punching Michael!! "Best friends for life". Yea, Brian was smart to get dumbass away from Big Ed.
Not a fan of the n word being used, but with that being said it is something Big Ed would say.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Kat for your comments and review. Angel is wise for his years and a good character in the story. Jenn is very proud of Justin and enjoyed letting Craig have it. Michael is just beginning to realize what he has lost beginning with Brian. I too am not a fan of the n word and didn't spell it completely for a reason. Yes, it is commonly used between black people for a difference reason. Thank you for enjoying my story and letting me know each chapter.
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
"Mr Kinnetik" makes me laugh. Still enjoying this and look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks Kate for your review. Mr. Kinnetik was a fun idea and it was all their was on the envelope for Angel to write to. I hope to have another chapter done tonight.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
I don't have a word for Mikey, he is soooooooo STUPID. What world he is living?? Love when Brian punch him. Hope Angle can keep Mikey out of trouble.
Can't wait to see Craig going down. Can't wait for more.
Another excellent chapter!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much complicated for your comments and review. The fans who review each chapter are very important to me. Michael is beyond stupid and four levels below idiot. Craig is very close to losing it all.
Reviewer: jane (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
wow wow wow wow. I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. When I think it can't get better - it gets better. You are an amazing writer.
Mikey is damn lucker Brian got him out - I'm glad only because as much as I think he deserved what he got I had trouble reading it - 18" and as thick as a beer can. This has run through my head to much.
My favorite parts are Brian and Justin and Justin and Gus, but I love it all - and check for the next chapter daily.
Thank you so much for sharing yourself with us...
Jane
Author's Response: Thanks jane for reviewing. Your compliment is very appreciated and motivating. Justin wanted to help Michael live but Brian wanted to get him away from Big Ed before he got Justin hurt with his big mouth. You will see many scenes with Gus and our boys in my story. I hope to have the next chapter up tonight; I'll start it after answering my reviews.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
Bravo Brian to punch him on the nose. Michael's really a stupid man. I hope Angel is the reflection of his name and he has the patience of a saint to handle him. I love Jennifer too.
Well, I know it's recurrent now but I say it even so : You're a great writer, you did a really good job.
I go to the bed too but I don't feel sleepy, I think I'm going to wake up my partner (*grin*).
Good night to you
Big hugs
Gehexan
Author's Response: Thank you very much Gehexan for reviewing this chapter; I'm always looking forward to your review each chapter. You motivate me to write more for you. I smiled at the mention of your partner; I love those moments too.
Hugs Back!
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
sounds like angel got snookered by bid ed a long time ago. hope angel goes straight, not too concerned abt mikie... he still doesn't get it.. angel pegged him right. good though what brian and justin did for mikie.
interesting abt taylor elec, wonder how the recession and all will hit him long term. perhaps brian and justin need an elec store? LOL
great chapter as always. look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much alys for your review and comments. Angel only knew Big Ed but didn't work for him; they just happened to be in jail at the same time. Angel is a good character in the story and central keeping Michael in line. Taylor Electronics is on the verge of going under and our lovers couldn't care less; they might help Craig but not the way he wants them to.
Justin wanted to save Michael's life but Brian wanted to get him away from Big Ed before he got Justin killed. I hope to write the next chapter tonight.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
Loved this chapter! I can't wait to read more. Looking forward to the next chapter. I know this might seem evil, but I kinda hope Mikey fucks up because I would love to see Brian kill him. I'm evil I know, but I would like angel spared of course. He seems like a good person.
Sweet dreams!
Author's Response: Thanks VG24 for commenting and reviewing. I feel you about Michael, and Angel's cool. They will be a side scene from time to time but not center to the story for a while. B/J have good things going on. Gotta sleep tonight.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
Nice.. I love the way Debbie went Lorena Bobbit on Carl.. and how Jen rubbed it in to Craig about how much money Justin and Brian really have... I have mixed feelings about Michael... but.. I guess he doesn't deserve to die for being.. a F@#king clueless, whiney, pain in the ass, big-mouth sex-offender......
Author's Response: HA! I love your comments; I had forgot about Bobbit until you mentioned her; Michael has a long way to go before he deserves to be free and he isn't the brightest lamp on the porch.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
take a nice nap Jt. Loved the new chapters. stupid michael never learns to keep his big mouth shut.. at least carl will be okay. this story is getting really exciting now...
Author's Response: I had a great nap and will sleep tonight too. I need more sleep still. Yes, the story is warming up.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
michael isn't worth the money that brian spent, but justin is too important to brian to let anything happen to him. brian is a better friend than michael ever could be.
angel is lucky, he better do good.
Author's Response: Very well said sjmpets3 on all counts. Brian was very concerned about Michael saying the wrong things to very bad people. You're right; it was about protecting Justin. Thank you for reviewing very much.
Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
i just read 10 and 11. both were great.
Author's Response: Thanks darkraven for telling me. I have to sleep for a while and write again later today.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
wow...jennifer REALLY rubed it in...mikey, mikey, mikey what can i say. why am i getting the fealing he's going to be stupid enough to try something while in hideing.
Author's Response: I love Jennifer very much. Craig deserved her reading his beads. You are very perceptive about Michael but Angel isn't stupid and it will be fun to watch how it unfolds.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
WOWWWWWWW!
This is your best story JT. Shit is getting intense big time!
Author's Response: Thank you Dave. One has to wonder if Michael fucks up or not. Hummm.........
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