Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2019 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
It's good to know that Carl is going to be okay. I'm sure you are going to make things better for both him and Deb. Craig must wish he hadn't disowned Justin once he found out how much Justin made in one day. LOL.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
I like how Brian takes charge and makes sure Harvath has the best of everything. Michael is soooo screwed. He coulda had part of that million dollars and he blew it. LOL. Love the last two lines.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Glad Carls OK... ~ K
Author's Response: The fact I didn't put in a minor character death warning should have assured you of that.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Bwahahaha! You just made up for the Carl cliffhanger. I didn't know you were going to let me continue to revel in Craig's reaction to Britin and in particular J's financial success. Yes!! (I'm cackling madly)
Just when I was wondering where Jenn and Em were, here they are. Hopefully, Jenn wants to talk to her ex and rub his face in it. Pretty please?
And a double wedding? This I gotta read...Lol
I'm off to the next (I love this immediate gratification!)
Author's Response: I'm so happy you're enjoying this story and reviewing. The reviews motivate me to write and I'm working on a new chapter now. You joined the story at a good time to read lots of actiona and details. The chapters are shorter now so they can go quickly for you. Your wonderful for reviewing each chapter; you know?
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Well, Carl is ok. It's time for Deb and him to retire now and enjoy their lives. I love the bit with Craig ... He‘s flabbergasted there. It's so good.
Excellent chapter. I just have a small issue with Angel. Is he a good or a bad person ? I progress in my reading, so I think soon get the answers
Kisses
Ihintza
Author's Response: Thank you again for the reviews. You're pulling me out of a very slow day with your responses. Angel's a good guy; you'll see how.
Kisses Back!
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Glad Carl is ok.
Nice w/ Justin showing his dad the house! HA! Craig hearing Justin telling Jennifer about his success.
Interesting w/ Michael, glad he realizes HE was in the wrong & Justin didn't do anything but I'm still worried. Wonder what Angel is up to......
Author's Response: Thank you very much Susan for reviewing. Carl is fine now. Justin had fun with Craig and made a point of calling his mom. Angel is good.
Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
I'm happy for carl and debbie :-)
hahahahahaha craig in your f*cking homophobic face
Author's Response: Thanks monica for reviewing. More about Craig and Jennifer in the next chapter. She lets him have it. I'm also about to post a new chapter soon after proofreading it.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Thanks for the dedication! I'm sooo glad Carl is ok! A double wedding? YES! I don't like what's going on in prison. I got a bad vibe...
As usual, great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks Gina Marie and you are most welcomed to the dedication. I"m honored that such an amazing writer as yourself is reading my work. Reading your work inspired me to try writing you know. Brian will be on top of the situation to protect Justin.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Excellent ! I'm glad for Carl and Debbie. I hope he's going to retire now. I love Justin dazzles Craig. Yes, man, your son is wealthy and happy. He's a great gay. You disowned him, how idiot can you be. Go, Jennifer, ram the point home !
Great job
Author's Response: Thanks Gehexan very much for this review. You might like the start of the next chapter too.
I have to sleep now and write tomorrow.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
justin is so evil sometimes. to have jenn talk to craig and rub justin success in his face. yay.
glad carl is going to be fine.
Author's Response: The conversation between Jenn and Craig just happened; honest! hehehehe
Carl is going to be fine and get into the grandfather business now full time. Thank you very much!
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
hilarious how nice craig is being, obviously an act for the tvs sale. hope Angel isn't too nefarious to plan to hurt justin or the gang.... no idea where else you might take this line. love how you're continueing mikie in jail although except for him accepting his lot or instigating bad things I don't know where you could take this. can't wait to find out how everything evolves. glad carl is okay.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting alys! I can say Angel is ok. I hope to hear from you in the next chapters that answer your question on the plot direction.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Great chapter... Carl will be ok and Craig got to feel like two cents..... one question.. why would Brian be Carl's emergency contact..doesn't he have 2 children ???
Author's Response: Carl's kids live out of state. He didn't want Debbie to get the call first. He trusted Brian to handle it wisely informing friends and family. Thanks for commenting BluvsJ.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
yes carl will make it...... lmao about craig... let him have it jennifer. :D
Author's Response: Nicole, you're going to love the next chapter. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
The part with Craig had me LMAO.
Boy you can write a story. This is uber fun man.
Author's Response: Thank you very much Dave for your review and compliment. I'll write more this weekend.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Hee hee!! Craig must feel like the biggest heel in the world next to Michael! Being a mean old shit to his son with his snide remarks and come to find out his kid made 4.5 million dollars in one day!
I'm glad Carl is going to be ok. BUT, I hope nothing happens to Justin. I'm afraid of what that Angel person is thinking.
Author's Response: Thank you oh so much for your review Kat. Later you'll find out Craig has major money problems now. Angel didn't get that nickname making bad things happen. You'll see his idea next chapter.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Glad Carl is ok. Brian really know how to handle Debbie. Yiipeeeeeeeee!!! I can hear wedding bell!!! (very soon, I hope).
Hahahaha, suck to be you Craig.
What is Angle going to do to Sunshine?!! Fasten your seat belt, coz it is gonna be a bumpy roller coaster ride.
Bravo. Hugs & kisses.
Author's Response: Thank you very much complicated for your review. Craig is stompted into the ground mentally now. There is a reason his nickname is "Angel".
Hugs Back! xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Nice! A much better ending then the last chapter! I love stories where Brian and Justin are a power couple you know on top of the world no one can touch them <3 update soon!
Author's Response: No problem Ashley; after catching up answering reviews I'm starting the next chapter tonight.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Oh my god! Excellent chapter! I'm glad that Carl is going to be ok. I hope Angel doesn't get Justin/Brian hurt.
XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Thank your very much VG24. Angel has a good plan; next chapter you'll see how.
Reviewer: BlindDreamer (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Damn that was fast,lol! Sweet sweet revenge on Craig, am seriously loving it!
Its good to see Michael accepting responsibility for what he's done, even if it is way too little way too late.
Now shoo! Go get some sleep,lol.
Author's Response: Danke BlindDreamer for your review. I try not to leave my readers with a cliffie for very long. Craig's in debt up to his eyeballs and not worth shit financially. I can't sleep now; slamming extra stength 5 hour energy drinks and on a writing marathon now. That's my way and I'm known for very fast updates and writing novels in record time. It's my style.
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