Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2019 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 7: Black Dumpling
It's good to know that Rage lives on, but seeing Justin with someone else is sad to me.
Author's Response: It really was not like he was really another man. The first gay experience for a new gay man is very important and sets the direction for his life. They just helped their new friend land safely. All he did with Justing was touch, kiss, and taste him; no booty was touched here. His brief experience with Justin only assured Jerry he wanted this in his life. They did him a very good thing.
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Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2012 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 7: Black Dumpling
Black Dumbling...LOL.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 7: Black Dumpling
“You don’t know how true that is Ted.” in deed... This is getting good...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Glad you like it. That was the only really ugly chapter to speak of with what happened to Michael in jail.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 7: Black Dumpling
Oh My God I was just reading some of the comments... Good Lord I hope that "Anonymous" never reads my stories...
Then I saw Balrogtweety's comments and smiled, Jane's the one that recommended I read Embraced... anyways just starting to get into the story.
I like whisking Michael and Lindsay off to jail right away its one way of not dealing with them... Sometimes I just never mention them... ha, ha, ha
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Because of that Anonymous flamer, Elsa Rose, the owner of MW has made it happen that only signed in members can now leave comments. Anonymous has messed it up for all the good people who would leave excellent comments. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: math teacher (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2010 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 7: Black Dumpling
In this chapter, Gus is only four years old, but Brian and Justin have been together for almost six years. I'm afraid that's not possible. Justin met Brian on the night that Gus was born, so if Gus is four, they've been together only four years.
If you want to say that they've been together for "going on six years," then Gus has to be five, almost six. Since you said earlier that Gus is old enough for kindergarten, age five or six would be appropriate.
Author's Response: I'll have to check the chapter; thanks for pointing this out.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 7: Black Dumpling
Don'tcha just love B/J wake up calls? Very stimulating! I also enjoy how they take care of each other too (sexual & otherwise).
Eeeewww! I'm glad you put the warning in there before I read about Michael. I'm sure this happens in prison, but I'm happy that I'm very ignorant on the subject. Didn't you write about Karma? Well, Black Dumpling, there you go.
I was kind of surpised that Sap was still able to control anything. I mean yeah, Michael was the rat, but Sap was the weasel that let him in to take down his operation and everyone with him. In fact, I'm surprised he's still alive, not only from his 'mafia', but also from powerful family ties any of his victims might have had. Hmmm...
Ok, I'm not a fan of B/J messing around with anyone else when they've committed themselves and I understand that Jerry is in the closet and J will be his 'first'. I'm just glad I didn't have to read about their entire encounter, though.
I'm hopeful that this is it, even though they will be in business in future...?
Well written, just not my favorite subject matter, you understand? Lol On to the next...
Author's Response: All Jerry did was touch Justin's body like a massage; his first male body to explore, they kissed, and he gave Justin head. Justin just laid there letting him have a positive first experience. Realize Jerry was scared of blackmail and needed help he could trust coming out. Brian and Justin are still counting the days they won't need a condom anymore. Sap isn't out of the woods yet but he does have connections in the jail system and paid the guards to let him see it.
That was the worse of it for Michael however, for the most part. Thanks for reviewing very much.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 7: Black Dumpling
I burst out laughing with comments (Oh, my abs !). I don't know what I like most here, the chapter or the debate... To start, it's a very nice chapter, a little hard with the jail scene, but also full of emotions... After, what a hassle ! Ok, there is a little time between Justin and Jerry. So what ? For a first contact with the gay world, he couldn't be more lucky. It's always easier with a wonderful guide. I saw many first times turn in complete disaster around me. Of course, your world has its codes, its own rules and sometimes, straight people are destabilized because it's non standard. I don't know if I'm very clear (in french, I could fill pages on the topic) but I think the gay world understands better the straight world than the opposite. Anyway, I'm not shocked here but it's true I'm a straight girl living in your world. And it's not always easy but it gives me different standpoints...
A wonderful chapter
Thank you for all your work
Big hugs
Ihintza
Author's Response: Thanks Ihintza; your English is excellent. I can understand what you want to say. Gay men are easy to understand if you remember where our brains are. "grins" :P Thanks so much for commenting.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 7: Black Dumpling
Due to your comment, I went ahead & read the reviews instead of waitng until tomorrow.
Hmm, I was a little bothered by the prison scenes w/ Michael but it was supposed to be unpleasant. Brian & Justin just seem to be more in character w/ the show than a lot of other stories. Justin & Jerry didn't bother me at all, completely understood.
Wow, I'm more surprised w/ some of the reviews......
You just keep doing what you do and once again, thank you for sharing it w/ us!
Author's Response: Thank you very much Susan for your great review. Michael had to pay; it could have been with his life. This chapter did create one major shit storm for me and my first one star rating and several eights. That's new for my stories. The irony is, that chapter also won the blue ribbon award too. Thanks so much for supporting my plot and understanding B/J helping Jerry out.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 7: Black Dumpling
Interesting chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you very much Susan. If you read the reviews you'll see the major shit storm that chapter caused. It also won me the blue ribbon award for excellence in writing. Thank you so much for being my reader and reviewing each chapter. Much appreciated.
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