Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2020 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
In the series it was Ron Peterson...not Charles Peterson!
Author's Response: My bad. I trust you are right; thanks for commenting and reviewing.
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2019 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
wow I just love this story. I do not know how I missed it
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2019 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
Wow. Brian and Justin are going well work wise. Lindsay is in so much trouble. I'm with Brian on killing Mikey.
Author's Response: That chapter leads up to a real nail biter.
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Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2018 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
Michael is a monster and I hope the police let Brian take him out. This story has me clutching my pearls and hyperventilating. Great job!
Author's Response: At best, Michael is the definition of idiot; however, this is how Brian decides to deal with him at the moment.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2015 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
While I thought both Lindsay and Michael manipulative and annoying, I didn't picture them as evil...and they both are in this story. Michael always seemed a bit of a dim bulb and incredibly whiny. Lindsay seemed pretty smart and definitely yearned after Brian, wanting to create her fantasy of the perfect family.
I never could figure out how moving to Canada would do much to solve Lindsay and Melanie's problems in the long term. The underlying problems wouldn't go away, and it was cruel to take Gus away from Brian, especially since Lindsay manipulated the situtation with Justin so he'd go to NYC.
Author's Response: I recall in the show that the move to Canada was more the result of the anti-gay environment growing in the USA at the time so the girls wanted to escape that stuff. Am I right?
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2012 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
This story is amazing. Will finish reading it tomorrow. Thanks for writing it.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2012 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
I'm liking Melanie in this story. It's nice to know that Gus and JR will be raised in close quarters. Thank goodness Larry had the sense to call Brian and warn him. Looking forward to seeing how much trouble both Mikey and Lindsay wind up in.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
You're right, Michael is f***ed.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
Damn, I knew it! I hope J's going to be all right. Michael is more than fucked, he just hasn't figured it out yet. I just hope B keeps his head and doesn't murder Michael, because J and Gus need him at home.
I'm glad Mel is moving back down. They all need each other and the kids will give Deb something good/positive to focus on. I was a little surprised that Deb took Michael's situation as well as she did, but then again when he tries to hurt two of her other 'boys' what can she do?
Glad that Mr. Peterson is on the same page as Brian and will try to get Linds out of the country. No one in the family needs to media circus.
How true the Gary situation rings for me. In my working history I've personally seen the same circumstances of the no talent folks so threatened by the talented (especially if they are younger, too). Love the 'Ride Me' slogan too. Lol
OK, great chapter again, but rushing on to the next to make sure J is all right.
Author's Response: You are so kind to write such detailed interesting reviews that show me how your feel about a chapter. There is a happy ending to Justin's injury. Thanks so much for your comments.
Reviewer: Lori (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
Just started reading this story, trying to read it slow so I don't get finished before you update. This is another great story, you are really talented as a writer.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the compliment Lori. I hope to hear from you as you read my story.
Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
wow, dramatic, i love the story and look forward to reading more
good work, thought Justin has to be one of the least luckiest guys on the planet
Author's Response: Thanks for the review siren. Justin's luck will soon be way better than he bad luck by far. Good times are coming.
Reviewer: . (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
love reading this story so much. even though it is is cery sad these things are happening, i hope u will still make it all right in the end. cant wait for great chapters to come thanks again
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm known for a wild roller coaster of a story with happy endings. The goods times are just around the corner.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
Ooh wauwww this is so good.
Poor Justin not in a coma again, please.
Author's Response: Marny, your my 100th review so the next chapter is dedicated to you! I promise a happy ending to an intense chapter going up later today.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
OMG!! Poor Justin! It'll take every cop in PA to keep Brian from killing Michael.
Author's Response: Yes it does Kat. I'm working on the next chapter and my beta will have it done about 12:30 Pm today Central time zone USA. My research is making the writing slow but good. I'll need these hours to write the next chapter. I want my medical facts and laws right; this is as real as life gets. I promise an intense chapter, many bad guys go down, and a very happy ending; the beginning of a wonderful high period for our lovers.
Spoiler Alert!: Have no fear. Justin is strong but he'll barely make it.
Reviewer: Raya (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
I didn't know he had to cum to pass on stuff, I thought pre-cum would spread them too so thanks for answering that, you learn something new everyday, lol.
Author's Response: There is a very small risk. Oral sex with a positive man is safe if he doesn't cum in your mouth and you swallow it. There is very little virus in pre-cum usually and the mouth is very hostile to the virus. If Justin has no torn tissues in his anus there is not risk at all. Thanks for your interest. I have many friends who are HIV positive and several in magnetic relationships (+ and -). In truth it's very hard to catch HIV. The positive person has to have a high viral load too for serious exposure. They can clean sperm and the man can be father.
Reviewer: Raya (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
I hope Justin wont catch anything from Michael, they really didn't need to let him put Justin at risk to prove he is a psycho. Hopeing Justin will be ok.
Author's Response: Since Michael didn't cum Justin is safe from HIV infection; maybe Herpes which I can say Michael doesn't have. This is not the end of the legal wheels or arrests tonight. Michael's rats on everyone who knows.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
crap mikie had to swing....
anywho love how mel is coming home, deb is watching the kiddos, kinnetic is working together rather than internal fighting. can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you very much alys for your review. I'll post the next chapter ASAP.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
OMG! My head is spinning! I swear no one tells a tale like you! I just caught up on this story and WOW! So much going on, I don't know where to begin! I'll just say this, Love Justin working at Kinnetik, fuck Lindsy, fuck Michael, and God I hope Justin is ok! Another great story!
Author's Response: Thank you Gina Marie. I'm doing my best to earn another Blue Ribbon Award. I truly believe this story will be better than Embraced by a country mile. I have tons of ideas for this story and I'm very motivated to write a masterpiece. I'm working on the next chapter now.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
Love it! Thanks for fixing some of the mistakes. It looks better now and I can totally picture Gus saying those things.
Author's Response: Thank you Vikinglass24. I might sometimes post a chapter and repost it with corrections so my readers get an update as soon as possible.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
Oh my god! What is with the cliffhanger? I loved this chapter though.
Author's Response: What can I say? I'm an evil writer for doing a cliffe. Writing the next chapter now and hope to post it later tonight. Thanks for your review VG24.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
So far it is...i can't wait fro the next chapter.... you have officaly got me hooked..
Author's Response: Thanks nicole; I'm writing the next chapter now.
Reviewer: Yaz (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
Evil Evil Evil person. I hate cliffhangers. Brilliant, fantastic. No wait Fucking fantastic more please. :) sorry for the language :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review Yaz. I promise a fast update.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
fantastic chapter... ohhh michael is in shit deep trouble now...can't wait to see what happens now..
Author's Response: Thank you very much Lesley for your review. I'm creating the next chapter tonight.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Sting
OMG....run michael run....i think i'm going to reach though my computer screen.
i think this comes in close second place to Embraced of all the stories you have writen...and little Gus aaaawwww :')
Author's Response: Thanks nicole for your comments. Michael is finished. Justin's in a coma from being hit again in the same place on his head. I hope for this story to be better than "Embraced". I believe I'm off to a great start.
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