Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 89: Come Sail Away

Another fun one! Love the boat. Always new & exciting things the boys are trying!

I WILL get three more chaps read tonight.......



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I once sailed a lot but it was expensive to maintain the hobby.

Reviewer: Annjeela (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 89: Come Sail Away

five days?  even with superhuman powers - I'm amazed they can stand (LOL)  That was fun to read.

Author's Response: Thanks Annjeela; it was fun to write too. I'm a fan of sailing and rent a boat once or twice each summer to keep up the skill. The boat that Justin bought can be rented for about $600 a day where I live in the USA.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 89: Come Sail Away

Imagine Justin in a little sailor's outfit! Cute!

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment VG24. Anyone who has sailed knows a rain suit is standard wear because you get water spray big time all over your body in decent wind conditions. It's fun and wet at the same time.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 89: Come Sail Away

wow love the boat ... pff a five day fuckathon * grinns * ... lovely update

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Marny. I appreciate your comments very much.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 89: Come Sail Away

Ok LOVVVVEEED this chapter!  Love sailing, love the boat.  Great pic!  Great update.

Author's Response: Thank you Gina. Looooove to hear from you always!

Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 89: Come Sail Away

exactly this is really great job

 



Author's Response: Thank your for commenting monica. I'm encouraged to write more for you.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 89: Come Sail Away

you're doing a great job jt, just wanted you to know.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review and comment sjmpets3. I'm very happy you like the story.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 89: Come Sail Away

My fathers own the boat and assume the expenses... We, the ‘grateful' children, have just the licence... The advantages of sailing, without the drawbacks... And then, it's not a big boat, just the minimum for a maximum fun.

I really liked this chapter but, 5 days ... wow (grin from ear to ear)

Big hug

G, 



Author's Response: Thanks myhazel_eyes. I didn't realize your family had a boat. I've sailed 21 footers and had a blast so I know what you mean the small ones are just as much fun. Hopefully I'll get out a new chapter tonight.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 89: Come Sail Away

 

Another great chapter... I wonder if the Guiness Book has a category for the most days of getting  F#@ked by a Vampire ???  Great boat...



Author's Response: Thank you BluvsJ for your comments. Guiness would require two offical witnesses to qualify for entry. That might be a bit much! I've rented that boat and for it's size it's terrific.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 89: Come Sail Away

That's correct... I loooooove the Rocky Horror Picture Show (It's THE film). I know some songs by heart and especially the Time Warp ... My father introduced me to this film and I loved it. It's so décadent, so sexy. Tim Curry is excellent in there.

I enjoyed this chapter, nice break ... I am pleased to see the boys happy ... And the hot scene, wow ... (eh, I never had a boat for my birthday and yet I put all my heart and soul into this...Well, I certainly missed the 5 days' duration, but impossible to handle, even 21 years old ;)...)

I wish them lots of fun on the boat ... It's the ideal and quiet spot for cuddle and love-making



Author's Response: Thank you myhazel_eyes. I've seen the Rocky Horror Picture Show over 200 times in the theatre when it was a cult craze all over America for many years in the 70s and 80s. I use to know the show by heart but that was a long time ago. Boats are fun and a big hassle. The slip charges are outragous to pay for and it's a pain in the ass to load and unload from a trailer. They require a lot of upkeep and sails have to be replaced after a few years of weather wear. You have to really love to sail to put up with the crap. And you're so right; boats are very romantic. Unless you plan to sail at least twice a month all year a person is better off renting one. Cheaper in the long run. Thanks for the review and comments.

Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 89: Come Sail Away

Five days? I did it one day and was bowlegged for three. Funny chapter. I've always wanted to sail and this chapter sparked my interest.

Author's Response: Thanks George for commenting. Heah, you know it's fiction; I doubt we could go 5 days if we weren't vampires and embraced powered lovers. Sailing's fun but basic Sailing 101 class is about $500 and new boats are expensive. You can make a great deal on a used one but you best get it surveyed first and not buy a lemon or be really careful. I've flown and sailed but over time let my expensive hobbies end. The experiences were cool though.

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