Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Forbidden
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 18: First Watch

Great chapter and visuals. Your details are delicious.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 18: First Watch

NICE!! It was time for them to be together again!

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 18: First Watch

Even though Ted was enjoying watching he also took care of them.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 18: First Watch

Wow! That was flippin awesome. I can't wait to read more. Did bright light flash at the time of orgasm or what? Do Brian and Justin have any powers? I'm a little confused about this but I am totally loving this story. MORE MORE MORE. When you get a chance of course!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked this part (and that you are enjoying the story overall) :) :) :)

The flash of light did occur at the moment of their orgasm. I rewrote that part. I hope it's a little clearer now. Brian and Justin do possess magic, but you won't know anything more than that until they meet Deb (next time).

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