Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 19: A Bee in My Bonnet, Part 1
Ok, a final detailed analysis of your work. The plot is very entertaining; your volume of adjectives is breathtaking and a joy to read; your characters are so in sync especially Emmett; the drift from canon very believable; the assertive Justin makes you want to stand up and cheer for him "You go girl". I suspect the hustler will replace Justin at Debbie's when Justin moves out (me quessing here). Stockwell is going to be dangerous for our lovers so you set up for some intense drama in the future; the peeping tom Emmett is so funny and his corny lines so like him I laughed till my side hurt with some of them. The sex scenes have only one answer: you were a gay man in a past lifetime or you have a very good correct imagination for details how we boys get it on; we love it rough and most girl writers don't show that but you proudly do and with accurate details. The neck biting is very popular for real. I'm very glad I took the time this afternoon to study why your work is loved and I totally enjoyed myself with a well deserved break from writing. Thank you!
Author's Response: I think you just made my month :D :D :D
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 19: A Bee in My Bonnet, Part 1
Michael hate is so much fun
Author's Response: I try not to say this often (because many of my readers are Mikey fans, at least when he's not in B/J's orbit), but... (whispering) it really is :D :D :D
Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 19: A Bee in My Bonnet, Part 1
I am really enjoying this story. I find it interesting that you have the character of Emmett seeing everything. It makes sense since in a lot of ways. The way the character was Justin's friend in the series. etc. Can't wait to see what you have Michael (and Brian's reaction to Michael) do next....
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying Em's pov. It's certainly been a blast writing it :) :) :)
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 19: A Bee in My Bonnet, Part 1
Excellent! More whenever you are ready!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll update this one tonight or tomorrow. Stupid work has been holding me hostage.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 19: A Bee in My Bonnet, Part 1
LOVE my Emmy Lou!! Michael had that coming to him for a long, long, long time!! I might read this again =)
Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed this part :D :D :D I couldn't agree more (that Mikey had it coming)!
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