Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2012 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 32: The Bleeding Edge of Technology

I can just imagine Justin painting the vividly colored image. 

Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 32: The Bleeding Edge of Technology

Great chapter. You're laser theory is right on and very accurate. The bending of space is a cool idea and beyond Star Trek warp drive. In theory you can jump anywhere in a split second this way. The most powerful laser today is 1.5 petawatts so your ratios are right.

Very clever how you hide the new advance laser seed charge ability. The entire chapter is within the range of being possible.

Looking forward to more chapters



Author's Response:

Optics and electronics were my primary focus for my EE degree. I was going to build a plasma ray gun but decided to stay with what I had more knowledge of. I hope you enjoy the next ship, the giant death star USS Loverboy. The boys are creating the designs now.

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