Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2009 05:13 PM · On: What You Hold Back

I love older Justin fics and mpreg, this is the perfect story :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much for that.  I'll try to post more seeing as you're really enjoying this.  Thanks for writing to let me know.  Later, Tay

Reviewer: feroza (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2009 05:30 AM · On: What You Hold Back

Michael desrved what he got and he should back off!

looking forward to the next post

 



Author's Response: Yeah, like he's going to.  He's king of dense in the head.  He's going to make a bigger mess I'm sure.  I'll try to post soon.  Take care, Tay

Reviewer: Kim (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2009 10:22 AM · On: What You Hold Back

I like seeing the relationship between JC and Justin, they seem like really close brothers that would do anything for each other.

Brian and Justin are so sweet and Justin pretending to have dreams about Brian to relax him made me happy :)



Author's Response: I think it was a nice touch at the end for Justin to do that for Brian.  The brunet stressing about a lot of things when he shouldn't be.  I'll try to update soon.  Later, Tay

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 11:43 AM · On: What You Hold Back

Yea, the baby is born! Love her name.

Michal just doesn't know when to quit. He gets his ass kicked and still wont' back off. He's heading on a one way trip to delusionville hell!

Poor Brian, why won't Justin just tell him that J.C. is his brother? It would put his mind just a bit more at ease...well it would give him one less thing to worry about.



Author's Response: I know that Justin should tell him and he will at one point very soon.  I think I have to think about Brian's reaction.  It has to be priceless.  He, he.  I hope you enjoy all that's to come.  Take care, Tay

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2009 11:18 AM · On: What You Hold Back

This was so full of action. I ate easter eggs while reading, good times :) Brilliant chapter, Justin pretending to have naughty dreams about Brian to make him feel better was adorable. I want more.

Author's Response: Ha, ha, ha.  Well, I'm happy you enjoyed it.  Aww, it was adorable.  Perfect word.  Thank you very much for letting me know how you like this so far.  I'll try to update soon.  Hugs, Tay

Reviewer: Jacinta (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2009 09:06 AM · On: What You Hold Back

Justin calling Brian kid is cute, and very hot. I hope they can do it raw soon then Brian will know hes the only one Justin wants :) Bella is a beautiful name. Happy Easter :)

Author's Response:

He, he, he.  I'm glad you enjoy that.  Maybe in a few months they will be able to.  Maybe longer.  Justin does want to have more babies and Brian wants to make Jusitn happy and I'm sure he wants the same.  I'll try to post soon.  Take care honey, Tay

Reviewer: Anabelle (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2009 08:58 AM · On: What You Hold Back

This chapter rules =D Justin is so sweet pretending to be talking in his sleep to make Brian feel better =D the baby coming, Justin telling Brian hes the only one for him, I loved it all =D =D



Author's Response: I'm so happy that you did.  Thank you so much for letting me know.  There will be more soon.  Hugs, Tay

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2009 05:44 AM · On: What You Hold Back

I soooooooo loved your update. but why are they keeping J.C. being his brother a secret??? god, you are killing me. :-)) rose

Author's Response:

Well, I know you guys are dying to know and there will be an explanation soon.  Justin doesn't want to lie to Brian.  He's just used to always covering everything up to keep himself and J.C. safe.  It comes out more out of habit than anything.  Soon he will start opening to the brunet. 

 

Hugs,

Tay

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 05:33 AM · On: What You Hold Back

i don't know what i enjoyed more. brian and emmett's relationship. brian being jealous of jc and justin trying to allay his fear by pretending to be talking in his sleep just to calm him. bella being born and having the names her fathers choose for her instead of michael, or michael getting beaten. this entire chapter was full of excitement. i loved it.

Author's Response: ha, ha, ha.  i'm so happy to hear that you enjoyed a lot of the things that happened in this chapter.  i like how brian and emmett are becoming best friends real fast.  the man is always there for brian without ulteriou motives like michael does.  michael is going to create more havoc and justin is going to be there to take him on.  i hope you like what's to come.  thanks for letting me know what you like here.  you take care honey, tay

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