Reviewer: Allison42 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2024 06:36 PM · On: An Ordinary Life
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Author's Response: What does this mean? I'm just very curious.
Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2022 02:20 PM · On: An Ordinary Life
Wow!! Beautiful story. Couldn't stop reading it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Hopefully you get to read more stuff you like. Let me know if that's the case.
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2022 10:54 PM · On: An Ordinary Life
WELL DONE!
Clapping standing and shouting š—£Bravo Bravo as you receive your standing Ovation from me. (Yup I clapped the whole day! If you must know, *it was hard to make dinner but I did it)
First I must tell you that when I saw the Finale chapter posted I screamed with joy (mostly because it posted within the year 2022 hehe ) and then got scared! (Donāt ask me why just weird like that) lol I must of just stared at the page for about 5 min before finally clicking on it. (yeaaahh think we established the weirdness already)
OMG! I must of re read it 10x!
First thing first, I Love You.
IT was perfect! You truly have the gift/talent of Storying/writing telling. As I said before you are 1 of the Top 3 writers on my Mount WriterMore in Fanfiction Authors (yes there is such a thing even if its only in my mind)
You tied up ALL the loose ends and then some. You even got the Baby Blues to make their appearance. (For that alone I was willing to mail you one of my Kidney) I really liked the way you had Brian find out about Justin being Trent. Didnāt think it would happen in a Diner out in public like that, TouchĆ©. Nothing you wrote happened the way I figured or predicated it would because DUH! Youāre not a basic boring writer! All I can say was I Loved this! And you did the ending Justice. (even if it was written over a decade timeframe hehe Yup im never gonna let that go) I told my daughter if something happened to me to bury me with the ipad just in caseā¦ā¦. But Seriously
Thank you for this wonderful story (one of many) I Look forward to more stories to come and pretty much whatever you write.
ps you can do NO WRONG in my eyes and because of that I would never bring up or mention that killers 2 need some love too *wink wink cough cough
update: forget killers 2, OMG!!! ALLERGIC TO CHOCOLATE! (just read) who do you want me to kill for you to help this along??? Cuz Iāll do it !!!! I Will!!!
Author's Response: Oh God. I love when a story does this to me. I yell like a crazy woman. My man be thinking we won the lottery. We don't even play. Lol.
I thought about getting them together in a romantic setting. But then, that's what was expected, so I ran the other direction. When I wrote it, I thought people wouldn't like it. I personally lived it. I thought it just fit.
I can't believe it took me that long to write this. But I'm very happy that I got to finish it.
I really hope you really love what comes out of my mind. ATC will be something. My muse has gone insane with it.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2022 09:26 PM · On: An Ordinary Life
I'm glad you started writing again, but sad to see this ending. Woww thanks for this wonderful story.
Thanks thanks thanks.
Aaggrr ... I want more.
* big hug *
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I wish there was more. But the muse has moved on to bigger, crazier things. Hope you enjoy it!
Reviewer: Belladonne (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2022 01:14 PM · On: An Ordinary Life
Author!!! Author!!! Thank you so much for this journey. When Trent called Brian Kid after all that time, I felt it all the way down in my toes. However, I’d like to report a case of author abuse -the preeclampsia. Were you really trying to kill the reader? Shootings, explosions, kidnappings, bad guys, worse guys and finally happiness, then a coma?? Ugh, my heart stopped.
Of course I wanted Justin back as Justin. Brian and I accept that this can never be. Although I do wonder if now when a really sexy biker rides up and offers a ride, knowing what we now know, should we hop on? For “Rescue…”?Absolutely!!! It’s not the story we expected, but goodness it’s the one we love.
I have always loved this story. For me it is vivid and alive because of the care you took with the writing. I could not only see and feel the drama, I believed it.
My hat is tipped. Thank you so much for finishing it.
Author's Response: Lmao. That's not what I wanted to write but I fixed it. Still, I see your point. Thank you so much for the wonderful review. Loved it! Made my day.
Reviewer: Beth (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2022 05:28 AM · On: An Ordinary Life
I also liked the characters you created in this. JC and Slater were awesome. The relationship between Brian and JC was cute and Slater was such a great friend to them. I would love to read about Trent proposing to Brian and how they found out he was pregnant with Chase, hint hint if you ever feel like writing a little epilogue with a few flashbacks haha pretty pleaseeeeee. Loved Bens part in the story too, he was great, even Camden grows on you and isnt so bad haha. Thank you so much for such a great fic :)
Author's Response: I was really sad to see the ending taking place. I wish there was more to give but I don't want to destroy a good thing. I will be sneaking in here from time to time to read it again, that's for sure.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2022 02:55 AM · On: An Ordinary Life
I have always loved this story. Now going back to read it from the beginning...
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. I am really happy to hear that. I hope you like the new stuff coming out just as much.
Reviewer: Beth (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2022 02:26 AM · On: An Ordinary Life
Wow what an awesome chapter! Loved it all. I was on the edge of my seat from the start Trent went into the diner and called Brian kid infront of Cam haha I was like oh here we go wooohooooo. The reunion was amazing and how cute we got another baby and what a perfect name Chase. Amazing story,it might even be my favourite one youve written. So feel free to add chapters here and there with snippets of their life haha. I look forward to whatever you write next :)
Author's Response: I'm happy that you seemed to enjoy it. I know I still come back and read it. The moment it was done, I was so sad. Maybe one day, I will add more to it.
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