Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2018 11:24 PM · On: Memories
It was so nice to see Brian and Justin have sex. They both needed the connection. It is difficult to see Justin and Brian hurting so much, both wanting Justin to be what he used to be. Brian is patient and that is the most important thing. I love how little memories of their lives together are coming out. As usual, great job writing and I think this is very realistic. I used to work with people with mobility impairments and I think you have done a good job portraying the situation.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it's coming across as realistic...I am doing my best to do that. With as much time as they've spent apart in this story, I was anxious to get them home and back to being intimate with each other...like you said, having that connection.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2018 07:30 PM · On: Memories
I really feel for Justin in this story. He is just so depressed that he isn't able to make any improvements with his hand, that it seems to be effecting everything he does. At least he is opening up to and talking with Brian about things. That conversation that they had about his memory was spot on. Just because something seems insignificant, if you take it a little further, you realize it could definitely lead to a defining moment.
Author's Response: Thank you <3 My beta Sandi really helped me make that memory scene what it turned out to be.
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