Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Fatherhood
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2018 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 53- Divorce Abounds

I've read your entire story and I really like the Taylor Kinney family you created. They move forward in their lives and make their children happy while other parents are selfish and think only of their work. Melanie and Lindsay are horrible with their children, I do not understand that they do not take a housekeeper or nanny to help them. As for Michael, he remains stuck in the past. I can not wait to see what he will do when he sees that he has lost everything. I hope Ben will do well with Jenny. I hope you're not going too long to write the epilogue unless you find a rebound. Thank you for this fantastic story.

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I really like the way the story turned out and am glad that enjoyed it.  I posted the epilogue tonight.

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2018 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 53- Divorce Abounds

Ben had to be as honest as he could be without hurting Jenny.

What's going to happen when Michael's month is up. Can't wait to find out.

I'm going to miss this story.



Author's Response:

I appreciate your continued support through the long time I have spent writing this tale.  I will be writing a new story shortly and hopefully you will enjoy it just as much.

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2018 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 53- Divorce Abounds

Lovely chapter.  Ben and Jenny will do great together.  I hate that this story is over.  I hope you have something else in mind.  You are one of my favorite writers.  Thanks so much for sharing your talent.

Dee Dee



Author's Response:

I will continue to write.  My first step is to write a few QAF holiday stories for the gift exchange.  I think my next goal is to expand some of my other one shots from a few years ago.  Lots of options, but I will continue to write.  It is something I truly enjoy.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2018 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 53- Divorce Abounds

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I HATE that this story is ending.  I have really enjoyed your story.  Poor JR, she asked good questions and was so happy that someone actually wanted her and really cared about her.  Looking forward to future stories from you.  Thanks so much for this great saga!!!!!!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Bill.  I have really enjoyed writing this story.  I will continue to write and will be posting new work soon-  for sure the qaf exchange will get two new stories

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2018 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 53- Divorce Abounds

The lifes of everyone has been altered and for the better for Gus and JR.  Brian and Justin take good care of Gus and Colin.  Quite easilly too.  Ben wants to be there for JR which makes her happy that someone puts her first.  Michael doesn't get it.  sigh.



Author's Response:

Fatherhood has altered everyone's life and this has benefitted many people.  The children are in such a better place thanks to their fathers.  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2018 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 53- Divorce Abounds

Great chapter!!   Well, if Michael thought Debbie was going to be on his side in all this, he was surely mistaken.    It was almost as if she anticipated all of this happening.    And the fact that all Michael cared about was his shop and his collectibles and that JR should be raised by her mother's, well, that just sealed the deal with her.   She's just happy Ben is taking a more active roll in JR's life and that way, she can still spend time with her.   



Author's Response:

Debbie wants her granddaughter to be in her life and realizes that yelling at Ben won't keep her there.  

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2018 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 53- Divorce Abounds

Michael will never change even now all he sees what’s going to happen to him and his collectibles. Ben is such a good dad to JR he is just what she needs and I love how she reacted when she learned all he was doing for her. She is one very lucky girl. 

 

Im so sad this amazing story is coming to an end you have done an incredible job with it thank you. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and I'm so glad that enjoyed it.  The epilogue will be posted next week.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2018 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 53- Divorce Abounds

Great chapter.  Can't wait for the epilogue.  This has been a fascinating story from the beginning stories.  Thank you for your wonderful writing.



Author's Response:

So glad that you enjoyed the story.  Thanks for waiting for the updates

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