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Reviews For Back for Good - The Pittsburgh Years

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 24

You're not going to let Melanie get away with trying to keep Gus away from his dad. Even thought the judge ruled in Brian's favor she might try which is a shame.

Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment - I really appreciate it :)

By now we know what happened next :(

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2018 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 24

This chapter was amazing. Melanie's pettiness resulted in the loss of her and now Gus will be where he truly belongs.

Author's Response:
Yes, Gus can finally be with his Daddy and his baby brother :)

More will be up tomorrow!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2018 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 24

I don't know what Melanie was thinking by denying Brian his visitation that first weekend, as it was court ordered. Her, as a lawyer, should have realized what a stupid move that was.? What did Melanie expect? That Brian would continue to send her $5,000 a month? Stupid woman. I look forward to Mélanie's reaction. Thank you for this wonderful chapter. Waiting for Sunday!!!

Author's Response:
We'll see Melanie in the next one and will finally get to meet her in person :)

Thanks for your comment, more will be up tomorrow!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2018 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 24

So we know know how Brian ended up with Gus. Good job. But will Melanie comply or will Gus have both mothers in jail.

Author's Response:
We'll see about that in the next chapter. We'll also get to meet Melanie in person then - finally :)

More will be up tomorrow :D

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