Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2018 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh wow...new plot...so i was busy reading other stories ..i thought then i will read when it is finished ..so here i am..this is an interesting start..looking to read what u have in store for us.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the start. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2018 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
Sounds like Justin is having fun. Hope trouble doesn't find him, but that Brian does.
Author's Response: Yep, he's living his freedom without parents. We'll see later if Brian finds him. Like there's doubt about that :D. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2018 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 1
Seems Brian will have his work cut out for him. Justin - talk about spoilt rich kid. Somehow I think there will one hell of a wake up call coming up - but will it be Brian or just real life delivering it - looking forward to finding out what's next.
Author's Response: Heh maybe there will be a wake up call or maybe not. I'm not giving away spoilers :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2018 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 1
Yes another story thank you ! Good start ! Brian will find Daphne but I don't think she says anything. What about the credit card ?
Author's Response: Yeah I think it obvious Brian will find Daphne :).
Unfortunately Ted won't be in this story.
I'm glad you liked the beginning. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
so far so good Keep it coming OK
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Erbear4474 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ooooooo yeah!!! Doing my new story Happy Dance 💃🏼 🤓 bring it on!!
Author's Response: Hah I don't think anyone has ever been this happy when I start a new story. I'm honored :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
Good start to the story and looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you. I was afraid it would be too boring. I'm happy you enjoyed the start. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great start! This is different, I like it!
Author's Response: I thought so. I had to write it when I first came up with the idea. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
Nothing but trouble ahead for Brian I think. Going to be a fun game of cat and mouse. Brian will find Daphne but I don't think she'll give Justin up easily..
Maybe Brian can get Ted to help find a paper trail if Justin is going to keep using his credit card to buy new clothes.
Washington DC or state?
Author's Response: Yes I can guarantee cat and mouse games :D.
The problems we who don't live in the us have. Washington the state :).
Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
Love the start of this new story. Can't wait to see where you go with it. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you. I was scared it might be too boring. But it will pick up later. Thank you for the comment.
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