Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Fatherhood
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2018 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 45- Good News And Bad News

Brian sure takes a lot on his shoulders and remembering the bullies and everything was hard. It’s not easy and when it’s time to explain to the kids it won’t be easy. I’m glad Sam rang with good news I hope that it helps Ben with J.R. .

 

Brilliant work c

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2018 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 45- Good News And Bad News

Hopefully this is good news for Ben.  Brian is very happy with his life and fatherhood  They have a wonderful life.  Lots of stress coming up.  

Dee Dee



Author's Response:

True.  Ben will probably have a fight but we'll worth it.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2018 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 45- Good News And Bad News

Thanks for the summary. I like this story so much, I actually forgot where it came from. I wish it was simple for kids to get the loving parent they deserve.

Author's Response:

I've been writing the series for so long that I thought a summary would be good.  Glad it helped.  Thanks for reading and commenting.  All children deserve living parents.  At least in writing I can make that happen.

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2018 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 45- Good News And Bad News

Another brilliant chapter.  I love the review of how this started and that you figured out a way that Ben might be able to get custody.  Can't wait for that conversation.



Author's Response:

I've been writing this trilogy for so long that I thought this was a great opportunity to review the story and how they got to this point.  I struggled with the custody issue and glad it appears feasible.

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2018 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 45- Good News And Bad News

Sam gave Brian sime great news. Can't wait to see how it plays out. Have a feeling Ben may be raising her alone. All the better if you ask me.

Gus is smart. He'll ask when he's ready and they'll be able to answer whatever questions he may have because they'll be prepared.

Nice that you went over everything from the first story this one and how they all connected.

Brian's thoughts are so Brian. I'm glad he's finally happy with all facets of his life.

I think this story is winding down to an end. Will miss it when it goes. Been with it from the first word in "The Stripper".



Author's Response:

Sophiesmom:

 

Wow.  Just wow.  I've been writing these stories for so long and I'm impressed that you are reading them for so long.  The discussion with Brian and Justin about the bashing will be interesting.  It seemed like a perfect place to put the review the entire series and I'm glad it fit in.  So happy that you are still enjoying it.  I may write some more in this universe-  not sure-  My muse went on a very long journey with this story and it hasn't finished yet.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2018 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 45- Good News And Bad News

Always so happy to get the update email.  I love this story!!!  Very interesting that Ben could get custody of JR.  Wonder what Debbie will think about that.  The bullying discussion with Gus should be interesting.  Thanks for the update!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

I think Debbie will fight Ben most likely but my muse will have to decide.  The bullying discussion will be difficult.

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