Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2018 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 44- The Father Father Talk

Ben is such an amazing dad to J.R. he knows what she needs and how to treat her. Micheal on the other hand needs a swift kick up the ass I swear if I could I would jump in there and do it myself. I’m so glad that Jenny feels comfortable talking to Ben about how things were. Brian and Justin will help them big time.

Brilliant work x

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2018 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 44- The Father Father Talk

No words. I have no words for the first half of this chapter in reference to that idiotic little man. Can't blame his up-raising or mother for his delusional dream world he lives in. That's all his own doing.

Ben is doing his best the best he can. It will all work out in the end.

Please not have Michael at dinner. He's only going to try and monopolize Brian. Probably won't even notice JR or even Ben,Gus, or Justin. Can't there be a flood at the store?

Author's Response:
Love it, a flood at the store- we will see what the muses come up with. I really appreciate the comments you continually post. Debbie is not to blame for Michael's parenting or lack thereof, but there will be consequences.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2018 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 44- The Father Father Talk

I have a feeling if JR is to grow up happy, Ben will need to find some way to get custody. Michael is to selfish to raise her and would only use her to be close to Brian. Not good.

Author's Response:
Ben really wants her and lets see if my muse can help make that happen.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2018 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 44- The Father Father Talk

Good chapter. So happy when I saw the new chapter posted. Love this story, just not Michael & the girls.

Author's Response:
I promised that I would update the story. I'm just not that fast at writing and updating. I have a full time job and a part time job teaching. I'm also looking for another full time position so my time is limited.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2018 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 44- The Father Father Talk

Poor Ben, he has two children to take care of. I see dinner time disaster coming soon. Did a littel happy dance when I saw your update email.

Author's Response:
Bob:

So glad you are still enjoying the story. Dinner disaster- hmm- makes me want to go read what I planned at the dinner.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2018 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 44- The Father Father Talk

Wow I am not sure Mel and Linda would ever agree to J.R. being out of their custody. This is a very interesting development. The guys are right that Michael isn’t and won’t be a full time parent and I suspect will put barriers up as well to stop Ben being the full time parent. He won’t see the alternative of Brian and Justin if it got that far being the parents as a good thing for J.R. just as aiding his obsession with his best friend

Author's Response:
My muse has added an unlikely twist to the story and we will see where it lands me. In the beginning of the story, Michael appeared to be a doting father, but it is all face value. I doubt he really cares about children.

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