Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2018 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 39- Pick Up
I like ALana as well and hope she stays. Oh boy I knew a blow up would happen at the school but wow. Poor Gus he was so scared. I’m so glad that te guys managed to get him in the car. Mel will regret tearing up those papers. I need to take a breath after that.
incredible work x
Author's Response: Mel was just really mad and didn't know what else to do. As a lawyer, she should know better.
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2017 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 39- Pick Up
Poor Gus what a scene. He seemed to rally on the way home. Getting one on one time with his dad was a great idea. Still very happy this story is continuing.
Dee Dee
Author's Response: Dee Dee:
So happy you are still reading this very loooooong story. Silly muses keep talking and I keep listening. I really like that Gus realizes that alone time with one of his dads is okay to ask for.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2017 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 39- Pick Up
Gus has everything figured out. Even though Brian and Justin have everything legally tied up, Melanie is going to do her best to undo things. I don't think she has a chance.
Author's Response: Brian is nothing but exacting and he won't ever tell Gus he can do something unless he is sure he can deliver.
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2017 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 39- Pick Up
I love their family life. The girls', not so much. Gus is ever thoughtful thinking that Jenn would love to have just time with him and separate time with Colin. Just like spending time with just Brian.
I see a big custody battle coming up, the girls reduced to visitations only based on whether Gus wants to see them. Poor Gus to be put in the middle. Brian and Justin will make sure he talks about how he feels about what's going to be going on at the time. They always look out for his well being.
Author's Response: Brian and Justin have always wanted what was best for Gus and if the best was living with Mel and LInds then that is what they would have pushed for.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2017 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 39- Pick Up
Oh dear those lesbians are complete nutters and sadly Gus and JR are the ones suffering
Author's Response: Sadly, the children are being passed around due to their mother's really not wanting to be parents.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2017 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 39- Pick Up
you are excellent at cliffhangers. Thrilled to see a new chapter. This is such a great story I hate to think about it ending. Thanks for the great update!! Bill
Author's Response: Bill:
Thank you. Cliff hangers are what makes the reader want to come back. Of course, they would be more effective if I updated more often.
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2017 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 39- Pick Up
Thanks for updating. I have been waiting to see what the girls would do.
Author's Response: thank you for commenting. The girls will be a pain I'm sure.
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