Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Holiday Happenings
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2018 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 34

Lol omg that was brilliant Jennifer really let Craig have it with both Barrels didn’t she. I bet he shit his pants after she left his office. I love how much she cares for the family and protects them all.

 

I feel for Justin it’s not fair his so called dad treats him like that he is missing out on an amazing family.

 

poor Joe, his uncle is an ass but I’m so glad he has Debbie and Brian and the gang in his corner, he will go far in like with them by his side. 

 

Fantastic work x

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2017 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 34

Happy Turkey Day, My Sweet Baboo to you and your family.



Author's Response:

Thank you Darling Sally.  I had a really great T Day!!!  Love you, your Sweet Baboo

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2017 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 34

I read "Silkness and health" and this sequel for now unfinished. I love it, it's really the season 6 that I would have liked! Their lives together, always so in love with just the right anti Michael and Lindsay! I hope you will continue this story I am looking forward to the next chapter and arrival of the babies. Thank you for these two great stories !! Sorry for my english !!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I am so happy you enjoyed my stories.  I am working on the next chapter of HH but real ife is not leaving me much time for writing.  I hope you continue to enjoy this long saga!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2017 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 34

Hi Sweet Baboo,  Been rereading again, and hope Kevin will written in.Like Grandmom Jen is always saying Kevin is just full of love. Brian and Justin, and the rest of the house hold especially Gus has given Kevin a wonderful extended famly who loves and teaches him many things to like Brian teaching him how to kick a scoccer ball, or Gus helping him with his reading and for all the kindness and love they have shown him, Kevin has given back so much love.I missed reading about the child he makes the lessons they have taught him so important and special. Love you, your Sally



Author's Response:

Kevin is in the next chapter for sure.  I am trying my best to get the chapter done.  It will finish Holiday Happening but the sage will go on.  First we will do Disney for Spring break and then time for the twins!!!!!  Always love hearing from you my Darling Sally.  As always, you sweet Baboo

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2017 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 34

SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!! I know...so late in reviewing. workign up a shit storm lately and then there was Thanksgiving here and I'm going away on Friday. HAve been terribly busy!!

gotta say...Delores is and idjit! Seriously?? she's trying to take on Jennifer?! What a fool. Never mind the fact she tried to actually lecture Jenn re: how she raised Justin? Again...what an idjit! Glad Jenn told Craig off. I highly doubt he'll take anything she says to heart. He seems to be one of those who blames everyone else, and he's perfectly good. Hope he heeds her warning though. could get nasty for him if he doesn't.

The meeting went as I had expected and hoped. joe gets to stay with dev and Carl thankfully. He's far better off there. What a major dick his uncle was! WOW! Glad Brian was there. He tends to go straight for the jugular when he needs to.

Well done!! so happy to see this and finally have time toread it and review.

cheers,

 



Author's Response:

I understand the work thing.  Been putting on some long hours myself. Delores doesn't realize how Jennifer has grown since she ditched Craig but she found out in a hurry!  Joe will be happy with Deb & carl and the uncle will be happy not having to alter his lifestyle.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Just one more chapter to go for this story. Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2017 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 34

“Molly and I love Justin and we love Brian and they love us.” 

    That just about says it all for this chapter.  I guess there will

be no more lunches between Craig and Justin.  At least not

without Brian and Jennifer attending.  Well – we can forget that.

    I find it strange that after all this time Craig is still holding on to

the thinking that Brian corrupted Justin.  Jennifer explained that

to him how false that is.  I’m sure not for the first time.  She also

stated all the things that Brian has done for Justin.  Craig already

knows them.  Maybe, just maybe, that is the issue for Craig. 

Jennifer could have nailed the Craig coffin by added that these

were things Justin’s father should have done, but didn’t.  Could it

be that is reason Craig hates Brian and continues to hold on to

that hate.  Guilt!  Well I think so.

     Terrific chapter.  One joy in reading this story is the

relationship between the characters. 

    Thanks for the chapter and for the wonderful story.

DavidR

 

 



Author's Response:

Hello my friend, as you know I always look forward to your comments.  Seems like you are pretty happy with this chapter.  I think Craig just wants someone to blame so he deosn't have to admit he is the one who fucked up his own life.  Always happy to know you are still reading and enjoying this long story.  Thanks for the review!!!  Bill

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