Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2017 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 28

Michael at Kinnetic sorry my only thought is you are out of your mind. Brian and Justin were wealthy but now it's over. I hope Cynthia fires him by the end of day one. All I got since anything else I say will probably get deleted by the police state running Midnight Whispers. At least it did not take you a YEAR to update.

Author's Response:
Hello my friend, you are one of my most loyal reviewers and I have appreciated our give & take with reviews more than I can say, So I hope you take this response in the manner it is intended. Since I am an Admin here on MW, I am one of the "police" you are unhappy with. Your comment on Sammy's story was mean. I know you are a direct person and so am I but there are all kinds of ways to say things and imo you went from direct to mean with that comment. No one gets paid for writing any of these stories, except with reviews. I truly understand being frustarted when stories get left unfinished but no one does that to annoy readers. Sometimes the creative juices just dry up, sometimes life deals people more than they can cope with. The story you reviewed is indeed "complete" but for whatever reason, I don't know the reason, the sequel was left unfinished.

I am very sorry if my comments cause you to stop reviewing, I would truly hate to not hear from you again. I think of us as web site friends and I believe "friends" should be honest with one another. If you were a member I would have shared this privately with you but this is the only way I have to communicate with you. If you want to reply please feel free to use the "Contact" feature under the "Author" section. Just chose PA Boi from list and you will see "Contact" next to my name.

I think working for Cynthia may be a turning point for Mikey. She is of the direct people like us. As always I thank you for all your support for my story!!!!!!!!! Bill

Reviewer: BlueButterfly (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2017 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 28

Ugh. Brian hiring Micky is going to trigger his delusions being "number one" in Brian's life again, even ahead of Justin and his three sons. I can see him pulling the "best friend" card at work and Brian is going to spend his workdays fixing Micky's messes. Please say he will end up getting his ass fired.

Perhaps hitting bottom (homless) would have scared him into getting a job. He had experience at the Big Q. Now that he's rescued once again, there's no reason for him to change and grow up; he'll be the same entitled jerk as always. Sigh. I love your fic, but it's very frustrating to read when it comes to Mikey.

Also, Mel is being out of character from the previous fic. In the first installment, she was reasonable and even respected Brian. Sorry, but it just seems like you changed her because now that Lindsay got help, you need a new villian.

It's your fic and I'm not telling you to change though. I always look forward to seeing a new chapter pop up.

Author's Response:
I think this job at Kinnetic could be a turning pont for Mikey. Having Cynthia as a boss could be an eye opener for him. Of course it could turn out that Cynthia fires him day one!!! I did sort of pass of Mikey's Big Q experience but he didn't leave there under the best circumstances so there would be no going back there and, of course, authors like to play fast & loose with facts that don't suit ther stories. Melanie is frustrated that she made poor decisions and beause of those decisions she has lost full control of her life. None of us like to admit we f-ed up. I suspect she will realize she is using Brian as a villain to feel better about herself. I hope you continue to enjoy the story and I really appreciate hearing the views of my readers - sometimes the readers influence the way the story flows but not always. Thank you so much for your review and please always let me know when you think I am heading in the wrong direction!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2017 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 28

I check every day to see if you have added a new chapter. This one was so full of good stuff. Justin is awesome when passed off. Brian must be nuts to hire Michael. This will end badly .

Author's Response:
Sorry I made you wait so long for this chapter. I love writing pittbull Justin. Brian is a softie when people he cares about are in trouble and tears are his Kryptonite. I believe Cynthia is more than a match for Mikey. Thanks for taking time to review because i am very shallow and LOVE, LOVE, LOVE to get reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill

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