Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2017 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 27

Never fear, you'll will forever be my Sweet Baboo.your patient and loving Sally

Author's Response:
Well that is a relief. I just posted the new chapter, H&K, your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2017 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 27

I know you've been helping our friend with the broken wrist and I'm glad she has support to lean on. But I know you and how you like being in your garden--so pay attention : my sweet babboo, get out of the garden now! You are causing me to go thru withdrawal it's not a pretty sight. You left with a cliff hanger! besides I miss you, love your Sally

Author's Response:
Darling Sally, I can't use Kim as an excuse. I have just been distracted. The good news is I sold my house so I no longer have a garden to putter in. The bad news is that doesn't mean I have spent that extra time writing. The very good news is that the new chapter will be posted later tonight or tomorrow. I am sorry for the delay, I hope this doesn't mean I am no longer your Baboo???????????????????????????

Reviewer: LGBTReader (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2017 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 27

I love this story. It's great to have things to relax with where people can read about happy sucessful LGBTQ+ familes and their friends. I also love all the realistic touches about both being in the LGBTq+ Community as well as the area where they live.

I hop you update soon and keep it oging for many more chapters

Author's Response:
I am glad that you are enjoying my long saga! I appreciate your nice comments, I love to hear from the readers. I hope to have the next chapter posted soon. Thanks for taking time to review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2017 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 27

      Ron just seems to see things differently. He really thought

that just because he is their father they would go with him. You

know, if Claire didn’t do what she did and continue to treat the

boys as badly that she did, I wonder if they would see things

differently. What if Brian and Justin didn’t take over. Ron doesn’t

seem to be cruel or abusing. As I said, he is just different.

    This situation brings to mind what happened many chapters

ago. John was playing soccer and there in the stands was Justin,

Brain and the family there to watch him play. It was written beautifully, as maybe for the first time, he was not alone. He was

part of a family, if not biologically but affectionately.

   To use the expression, these people ‘were there for him’. How

much was that worth to John. Everything! So of course John

wants no part of Ron. John has people around who care for him,

who love him. He has it all

   DavidR

Author's Response:
I agree that Ron has a unique way of looking at things. John & Peter did not lick out with their parents. I think they appreciate B&J all the more because of their bad expieriences with Claire. I think they realize a father who abandons them for 10 years is not a winnner. Ron looks at how the boys could help him, nothing about how he could make up to them for all the years he was gone. John & Peter have been embraced by the entire household and family - B&J, Grandmom Jen, Alice & Charlie as well as friends. Glad you enjoyed this chapter!!!! Thanks for the review!!!! Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2017 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 27

Love that Joan is supporting Brian and Justin having custody of the boys. Ron Townsend had better pack up and go back to Alaska.

Author's Response:
I think Joan is more vetoing Ron rather than supporting B&J. She has enough sense to see what a disaster Ron would be as a father. I keep thinking about a line from the Paul Simon song "Fifty ways to leave your lover" but I change the words to "get on the bus Ron". Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2017 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 27

Joan being on Brian's side is a complete surprise, to me and to the boys. It's about time she did the right thing. Debbie taking Joe in is no surprise either. I hope Joe will be happy there.

Dee Dee

Author's Response:
He Dee Dee, not sure Joan is so much on Brian's side as she is opposed to Ron Townsend. She knows that being with Ron would not be good for John & Peter. We have to see how Joe likes living with Debbie and what his uncle thnks about that arrangement. Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for the review, I do love to hear from the readers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2017 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 27

OMG OMG OMG another chapter and really soon after the last one I may need a few minutes for my heart to stop racing from the excitement of seeing this. Ok deep breath I knew Ron would get nowherewith those boys though I admit to being shocked Joan was unwilling to assist him, but I get it she was more unwilling to bankroll him then anything. Peter is such a smart kid calling 911 the moment he felt unsafe although I think he also knew or remembered in the back of his head Alice knew a lot of the Sheriff's so the odds were they were going to help Alice and him and John over the man claiming to be his father. I love that John and Peter both said they were happy where they were had no interest in going anywhere and that they had changed their name to Kinney that was the best part.

Joe: oh is he going to love living with Deb yikes and that Uncle may have to do more than boarding school.

The murals I was 100% positive Lindsay would try to do more than Justin assigned I am betting she still might we need some angst there and I have no idea why I want it but I do.

I was so happy to find this chapter and not to beg but I need a baby update and shouldn't Justin be designing their nursery. I can't wait for more and another this month would be amazing ok done begging for now...

Author's Response:
Let's not forget that it was a longer than usual chapter too!!!! Even Joan can recognize what a scumbag Ron is. It doesn't seem like they ever got along even when he & Claire were married. Peter probably did remember Alice reading the riot act to the deputies that came to the house in reponse to Joan's phone call. Joe and Debbie and we can't forget Carl ,that would be an interesting household for sure. We'll have to see what happens with the Uncle. The murals aren't finished yet.....

I agree we do need a baby update. I get myself off on tangents and it is good to remind me to get back to important stuff. I hope to have another chapter posted this month but I can't promise anything. Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for the review!!!!!! Bill

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2017 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 27

It's a surprise have Joan on the boys side but at least she has her grandson's best interest at heart. (There's hope for her yet - maybe!!!!) The boys and all the family are strong, they will weather this disturbance as well. I am curious what Ron is up to - 10 years is a long time to ignore his sons and then come and get them just because they are living with 2 gays. Got to be more going on. Looking forward to more as always.

Author's Response:
Joan found someone she thought was worse than B&J for her grandsons. Happy you enjoyed this chapter. Ron thinks his sons may be useful to him, he is not a nice person. Thanks for all your support, I am always happy to see your reviews!!!! Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2017 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 27

Great character so full of details.yay

Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it!!! Thanks for the review!!!!!!! Bill

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