Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2017 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
Brilliant first chapter of this story' I can't say I understand the hangover because I don't drink but I'm guessing it's like a migraine now those I get. They all cracked me up with the way they each coped with it. Omg I laughed at Lindz she should have listened to Faal huh
awwwe what Faal and Zee did for Justin and Brian melted my heart 💕
eeeesh Michael thought they were joking, seriouly wow that shit hit the fan and splattered in his face.
Reviewer: MissMerlot (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2017 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
Dear all those who have reviewed,
Please accept my sincerest apologies for not responding to your reviews. RL gave me a kicking and to be honest I forgot I posted the story on here and only remembered when Kim pinged me today.
I have read each and every one and am so pleased that you have all liked it. The 3rd, and last, story The Rattle of Snakes is going to be posted, again with the help with Kim and her co-admins.
I have updated my preferences so I know I have to answer reviews.
Thank you all once again for your words of encouragement.
Best
MissMerlot xxx
Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2017 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
great story - thank you for sharing
Reviewer: Nukefan2012 (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2017 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
LOVED this story and its prequel!!!!! Would love to have another sequel with Zee's father and his (attempt) at revenge. And maybe Lindsey and Michael trying more stupid stuff to get back into Brian's life (or get rid of Justin). The only thing I would have liked to see, was more private scenes between Ben and Steve. Seeing the beginnings of their marriage would be fun!
Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2017 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
I finally made it to the end, and all I want is more! I'm completely hooked on this verse. Great great work!!
-Tiffany
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2017 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
A much wanted continuation to your last story. Lindsay seems to think whatever Michael did it shouldn't matter, but then she has such a sense of entitlement herself that the fact he wasn't paying what he owed doesn't sink in. Then she has the nerve to try and hit on Faal! Michael things it was a joke? Well, it wasn't and he forfeited his store.
Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2017 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
Caught up on the original story. Glad to see the next installment start up. Great chapter!! Keep them coming :)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2017 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hi, Nicole! Just a quick note to thank you for posting this story on here! I have to play catch up with the original story first, but then I'll have a nice, long story to read afterward. I'll be looking forward to it. Thanks again. ~Kim
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