Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2016 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 6

you are really stretching this out before we get to the main event. The suspense is building. Fun story!! Bill

Author's Response:
I finally succeeded in this :D. I always wanted to write something where the plot builds up slowly. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2016 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 6

Finally they kiss, I think Cynthia knows something, you can't be sure about Debbie she's like a dog with a bone and never feels bad about meddleing into everyones business. Justin was quiet telling by rubbing Brian's neck and shoulders, people just don't touch the stud, a great chapter.

Author's Response:
Yeah, Debbie is always busy sticking her nose where it doesn't belong. I'm happy you liked it. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2016 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 6

Looks like Justin will be moving in soon. Just having Justin near seemed to help without Justin offering suggestions.

Author's Response:
Yes, Brian is all better when Justin is near. Thanks for the comment.

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