Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2016 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 14
that damn michael is a pyromaniac now!
Author's Response: That's one possibiity
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2016 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 14
Great chapter. Plenty of angst with Mikey, him of the why can't we be together. Look at Justin, blond, blue eyes, nice personality and then look at Mikey, sullen, whiney and zero personality. Good for Emmett for not taking sides. Now we have a fire. Hope Justin's work survives. Suspects - Mrs Dell, Justin's dropping her? Anotole, he's a little wonky. Mikey, my favorite. Next chapter please!!!!
Author's Response: You have good suspects...check out the new chapter for the answers.
And I agree that Michael is just no match for Justin. Not that Justin is worried !
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2016 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 14
Now let me see, who would been jealous enough to set fire to the building???
I hope Justin's alright...
Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Who indeed? And is it jealousy? Answers in chapter 15!
Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2016 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 14
Anatol finally get to Justin by setting the fire. Of course things were going so well something had to ruin it. Damn!!!
Author's Response: Well, a french saying states basically that nothing interesting happens to happy people so I really had no choice!
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2016 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 14
Oh no! And you left us hanging!
Author's Response: Hey, if it works for The Walking Dead...
Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2016 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 14
Jeeez...who'd a thunk that michael would give Brian food for thought? LOL. Porr Brian, he has to go home and now think about all that Michael said. I mean the shit about them being together he can sluff off...It's all redundant. (adn really really creepy!) Iterensting idea though. that he chose similar to dad as they didn't matter to him, he was the dominant one since he wasn't with his dad.
A small part felt sorry for Michael having Ben's new lover there. But really....how was Justin to know? Hopfully Deb will be able to smoothi it all over. In her soft spoken, loving and nurturing way. lol
Uh no! things aren't looking good for our artist. who could it be? Obvious choice would be Michael, but is that too obvious? Is he that stupid? Then there's Anatol. Or even his agent. Isn't he breaking ties with her? So many thoughts are running through my brain.
Looking froward to the next update!!!
thank you for posting and sharing!
Elaine
Author's Response: Thank you, I love your comments. You're the first to suggest the agent as responsible for the fire, she's certainly a possibility.
As for Brian and his usual tricks, I always found fascinating in the show that Brian has an instant and strong attraction to Justin, who, though indeniably beautiful, is nothing of his usual choice of men. And the relationship between Brian and his father is (after B/J of course) the one I found the most interesting. So this is my way of explaining Brian's sex life, in which in refuses to let his partners have even the least power on him, with his "one fuck only" policy, and to keep total control of the situation, when he has none with his father, even as an adult. The fact that at 30 he still hasn't been able to tell his father that he was gay, for somebody so brutally honest as Brian, also tells a lot about the importance of his father in his life. I really think that they shouldn't have killed Jack in the show, there was so much to do with his character. They could have him come back as a ghost, as in Dexter; wouldn't that have been great?
I'll really try to upload by the end of the week.
Bea
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2016 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 14
Omg Noooo poor Justin all that work ruined
Author's Response: I'm afraid things will be tough for Justin in next chapter.
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2016 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 14
Oh! that is just evil. I bet it was stupid Michael. Hope to find out soon.
Author's Response: I'll upload as fast as I can, I really am a good girl!
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2016 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 14
Nooooo! My heart can't take it...Is Justin safe? Has his work been destroyed? Is the fire accidental or arson? I have so many questions. Great chapter and please update soon...
Author's Response: All your questions will be answered in next chapter, and I'll try to update soon!
Reviewer: Nadine (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2016 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 14
Please tell me Justin was with Brian in his loft.
This is really great. Thanks for sharing:)
Author's Response: I can't spoil what's coming next, but I'll do my best to upload soo, thanks for reviewing
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2016 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 14
What!!!!!! Not a good place to finish.....my head is exploding..... And why do I get a creepy feeling Michael's behind the fire - it's the kind of childish thing he would do in retaliation of perceived wrongs. I'm definitely worried about Justin safety as well the mural - if it's destroyed it will devastate Justin. Please don't let us wait too long for an update. Need more, more, more.......
Author's Response: Thanks for your enthusiasm in the story, it's really great to read such comments.
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2016 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 14
Oh No- Update soon- please let it not be Michael who did this- somehow I have this awful feeling- hopefully I'm wrong
Author's Response: I'll really try to update by next sunday, thanks for your review
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2016 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 14
Ack! what a what a place to end that chapter! You're a very evil person - ha! I really enjoyed this chapter, Bea! Now you've got me wondering if this was accidental or intentional. I hope Justin is able to save his work.
Was so happy to see an update! I'll be looking forward to the next part! TY for posting this story on here. ~Kim
Author's Response: No I'm sweet...I just had no idea cliffhangers were so fun to write! I'll try to make it up by updating soon.
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