Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2018 06:03 AM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do
What is going on..,??? What happened to justin...i so wanna know...cant wait to read.
Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 12:55 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do
Hello again! Another great chapter. I really like the way you verbalised Brians thoughts. The sarcasm - "one sunshine wasn't enough” :-) - and his anger towards Justin. And although he had realized how cruelly and meanly he sometimes had treated Justin in the past, he plans on doing it again. A kind of revenge. I felt sorry for Justin and it hurts but it was good to see that Brian also hurts himself with his actions. When I read this chapter for the first time I wondered about the “don’t fall in love with me again”. It brought much tension into the story and was one reason why I couldn’t stop reading yesterday! J Great story, thanks and warmest regards, a.
Author's Response: Brian used anger as a defense. He thought Justin had moved on and he didn't expect that to hurt him too much, not when he was just fine after six years without Justin. Thanks:)
Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 10:05 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do
Bitter much, Brian? ;)
Despite how mean he's being, I kind of like that he's so hurt - it just proves how much he still cares. I hope Justin can take it. He's older, and wiser.
Though I am a little concerned about his 'don't fall in love with me' comment...This isn't 'A Walk to Remember' story is it?
In any case, loving it!
Author's Response: I stole that line from A walk to remember actually. Thank you so much for reading and commenting, I appreciate it:)
Reviewer: feet526@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2016 12:52 AM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do
Oy vey!!! Be still my heart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much:)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 11:00 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do
What chapter number does Brian stop treating Justin and stop using him.
Author's Response: The next two chapters are vital. Chapter 3 might aggravate you if you didn't like the way Brian was on chapter 2. I needed the transformation to go swiftly, and you feel that shift on chapter 4 onwards. I hope you'll give this story a chance, it's angsty but definitely with happy ending :)
Reviewer: Kelly (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 07:56 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do
I like this and I understand that Brian feels pain from Chin Rat when Justin left him but Brian was part cause. He could of stopped it. As for Justin moving away was wrong in not telling Brian but Brian should ask him what happened before treating him like this. I'm surprised at Brian for saying he could still use Justin for the sex. Why was Justin ok with wanting to see Brian again like a trick or sex Toy? Does he have a self esteem problem because he acts nervous around Brian? When will we find out why he left and did somthing happen to him that he told Brian not to fall in love again with him? Brian is still in ,love with Justin but Is Justin still in love with him? I hope the next chapter can shed some light on things? Sorry for all the questions Lol. I hope Brian stops using Justin. Hope next chapter soon.
Author's Response: I'm afraid the next chapter would aggravate you more, but Brian only needed time. He needed to process it, that Justin was back, and that he was still in love with him. He needed to let go of his fear. We will learn about Justin in later chapters, and yes, Justin was still in love with Brian. Thank you for the feedback:)
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2016 07:40 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do
I can't believe how childish and petty Brian is behaving. Apparently Justin has no idea he hurt Brian by leaving six years ago. They should have talked instead of jumping into bed. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: It wasn't easy for Brian to open up. I agree that if they just sit and talk it all out, they would both understand the other better. But it wasn't the case with Brian and justin. I hope you will like the next chapters. Thanks for reading:)
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2016 06:46 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do
Oh, I'm loving this. I can actually see Brian acting like that, even if he is being a real asshole. I wonder why Justin is asking him not to fall in love again. I suspect Justin's story will help us understand. And kuddos to you for the built-up tension here. Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Yeah, Justin has his own baggage too. I'm afraid we have to wait for the later chapters for that, though. But the angst has just started, there are more to come. Thank you for the feedback, I appreciate it a lot:)
Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 06:42 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do
Another thought was that besides Brian being hurt what about Justin being hurt. Brian didn't ask Justin what he went through, to make him leave like that. And how he felt about the whole Ethan thing. They both felt heartbreak but didn't tell eachother. Doesn't Brian need to know some how, how Justin felt to and Justin needs to know how Brian feels. Will they talk soon and stop with the games so they can move on and find their way back to eachother?
Author's Response: Brian was scared, he knew he still love Justin but too afraid to even think about it. So he focused more with his anger because he thought Justin had moved on from him. Communication was always Brian and Justin's problem. But Brian needed time to fully grasp that Justin was really back and that he still loved him. He needed to let go if that fear. Justin has his own baggage too. It would reveal in later chapters. Thank you for the feedback:)
Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 06:24 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do
I liked the first chapter but the second one, I didn't like the way Brian is thinking of ways to get back at Justin who he really loves but doesn't want to admitted it outloud. I get that he is hurt but they broke up with it being both their faults. Why is Brian acting like an ass, spoiled kid. He wanted to hurt Justin and make him feel humiliated and small. That's not a Brian that I want to read about. He should talk to Justin not calculate plans to hurt him, that was terrible what he did to Justin. I also didn't like reading Justin being so needy and let Brian sleep with him and do that to him. Why didn't he tell Brian off and make it clear that they aren't going to do this or somthing. Is this the way Brian will be towards Justin in upcoming chapters? And will Justin just take it? I always hated that scene in the show where Brian says that his eleven o'clock was there. But he didn't plan it . It was Brian being Brian. I will read the next chapter and give it a try.
Author's Response: I'm afraid Brian would be cruel for a little bit longer. Justin has his own reasons for letting this happen, we would know it in time. I hope you'll give this a chance, you might be surprise how it turns out to be. Thank you so much for reading:)
Reviewer: Cathy (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 06:07 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do
If it's going to take a while for them to get back together, I hope Brian is going to treat Justin with respect and not like a trick or play these games with him. I didn't care for Justin running back to Brian and allowing Brian to treat him like that. And Brian playing these hurtful games with Justin, not cool. He's so immature and it's his fault as well as Justin's that the had broken up in the first place and if Brian couldn’t move one and let go of his feelings, that isn't Justin's fault and he should talk to Justin and not plot against him. I think Justin should have more back bone and stand up for himself. Is Brian going to stay this way for a while? And why doesn't he want anyone to know that he slept with Justin? Don't care for this Brian's actions.
Author's Response: Justin has his reasons. He is a little out of character here, but it's because of that same reason. As of Brian, he just needs time to grasp with his feelings. Thanks for reading:)
Reviewer: Rebecca (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 05:57 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do
This chapter has Brian being an uncaring ass. Just because he can't admitt his true feelings for Justin and is pissed that he still has them , he is mad at Justin. And because Justin left without giving him a second thought and now that he's back because he is acting like Brian is no one special he is pissed because he still care about him. Brian is acting like an uncaring ass and I hope that isn't going to last long. He is being a big baby and playing games with Justin. I don't care for that kind of a Brian. Will this treatment of Justin go on for many chapters?
Author's Response: Just a couple more chapters. Brian needs time. Thanks for the feedback:)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 05:44 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do
I don't like that Brian is treating Justin like that. It was his fault just as much as it was Justin's for them breaking up. It would be nice for Justin to ignore Brian and not sleep with him and make himself have some dignity and not let himself be used and treated bad by Brian. I hope that Brian starts treating Justin with respect. And why does it have to be on Brian's terms, why is he more important then Justin. Awaiting next chapter.
Author's Response: Brian already acknowledged that it was equally their fault. He even tried to look for Daphne to ask about Justin after two years he left Pittsburgh. He guarded himself again and was so sure that he wouldn't do the relationship thing again. Then Justin came back and he felt so affected that it scared Brian, hence, focusing on his anger. Because he thought Justin wasn't as hurt as he was when he left. He focused on that and let his anger boils down.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2016 01:15 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do
I get that Brian is angry, he doesn't want to admit that he cared. But how will that anger affect the story. Is there a chance that he'll not be an uncaring asshole?
Author's Response: The anger was just a diversion, a defense against to his true feelings. Though, Brian liked it or not, he already loved Justin. Thank you for the feedback:)
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 01:02 PM · On: Only you and you alone, can thrill me like you do
Gentlemen, to your corners. Next round come out swinging.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
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