Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2016 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 7
Wow. tellement de choses dans ce chapitre. Je n'ai pas été déçue avec l'agent de Justin. Je dois dire que j'adore vraiment ton écriture et ton imagination. L'échange avec Brian était vraiment bien écrit. Et avoir introduit les Pink Possies est assez génial. J'aime vriament. VRAIMENT. LOL
Author's Response: Merci beaucoup, je passe tellement de temps sur l'écriture, il n'y a pas une phrase que je n'ai pas réécrite au moins 3 fois. J'ai un bon niveau d'anglais, mais je n'imaginais pas à quel point ça serait difficile d'écrire dans cette langue; de devoir toujours tout vérifier (et chaque fois que je me relis je vois des fautes), d'avoir 1 phrase qui me vient en tête en français mais que je suis incapable de traduire,... Tu as les mêmes difficultés ou ton anglais est meilleur que le mien?
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2016 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 7
What a night for Brian. First he had to dance with that bitch Catherine then he get into a fight in his tux and winds up in jail. I think Justin is the best thing that's happened to him in a while. Hope when Justin's year is up he gives the bitch her walking papers because he's in love and chooses to stay with Brian.
Author's Response: Oh yes what a night...one he'll always remember for sure, I'm pretty sure his beautiful tuxedo was damaged in the fight too. And he's not very angry, that's telling something about Justin.
Thanks for reviewing
Reviewer: Cassie (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2016 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 7
I Am enjoying the story. Can't wait for the next update. Lindsay needs to stop pushing Justin and Justin needs to stop feeling sorry for the nut case. I hope the agent doesn't cause Brian to push Justin off a cliff. And to put ideas in his head. It would be so refreshing for once to have Brian say fuck off to someone trying to interfere with his relationship with Justin and for him to not be persuaded by another.
I was confused by one thing. In chapter 7 at the end when Cody catches up to Justin and threatened him wasn't Brian there with him. They were all walking together but Brian didn't say Anything? Even if Justin was trailing behind him he would of been aware that his blond wasn't by his side and he would of heard the conversation.Then in the next chapter when Carl tells him about Cody at Deb's house Brian acts like he didn't know. Wasn't he there when Cody went up to Justin outside the police station? Confused lol.
Author's Response: Well, you certainly have a point, I should have visualize the scene better.
Does this work? Brian is ahead talking with Cynthia about why they were in a fight, Emmett, Ted and Michael behind, all of them out of the door of the police station, Justin still inside going out when Cody catches up with him. Justin and Cody are still in the police station so the scene is neither loud nor long (less than a minute) and that's why Brian doesn't notice.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2016 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 7
I love this. Justin is such a strong and independent guy. No wonder Brian is attracted to him. His agent is a real trip. She needs to butt out.
Author's Response: Thanks, I love a strong Justin! He was in the show, but there was such a gap between his situation (no diploma, no money, no job) that it was difficult to feel equal to Brian who had it all
Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2016 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 7
Yeah....do NOT like Mrs. Bell at all. I hope down the road Justin tells her to take a hike. I don't see him putting up with anyone ordering him around, contract or not. Let's face it.....we all know that B&J will figure things out, that Justin is more than just a boy toy. She nailed it when she commented that brian was trying to make a statement. she wants to stop him?? good luck! she may interefere for a bit, but it HAS to work out in teh end right?!
Cody brings in a whole new level of angst. don't trust him at all. (didn't like teh whole pik posse story line anyway) Hope cody gets what's coming to him at some point. either that for falls off the endge of teh planet. lol.
Great chapter!! Great story!!
Cheers
Elaine
Author's Response: Thanks! I never liked Cody and his buddies either, they totally belonghed in jail. And yes Justin is defintely no boy toy, he's strong. But Brian has about the same issues that in the show, not wanting to interfere in his career (even if he's doing a lot better than in the show, he's already a big name, but he's just 24).
Bea
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2016 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 7
aww Cody was all talk i don't think he can do anything to Justin.
Author's Response: Well he did start the bar fight so he's not all talk!
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2016 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 7
Oh dear I thought Brian had trouble keeping his blonde artist close with the agent but I fear it is coming from all sides soon
Author's Response: Yes ! Poor Brian and Justin don't have many people on their sides now! And all have the best intentions for them of course!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2016 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 7
What an interesting evening. Of course, we knew Anatol would show up again, we just didn't know where. Cody and the pink posse show up and I've got to wonder what you have planned for him. I'm not sure I like Justin's agent. She says she's looking out for Justin's interests but is she? Love how well Justin and Emmett get along.
Author's Response: Emmett is one of my favorite characters on the show, I love his Aunt Lula's quotes, his cheerfulness...
Justin's agent is a business-woman, she is very one minded so yes that will be an issue in Brian and Justin relationship.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2016 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 7
Hi, Bea! Still enoying this story very much. That ending kind of worries me with the Pink Possee, though. I guess I'm a little perplexed as to why Justin is defending Anatol so much. I get that he's sympathetic to him if the guy is a loose cannon, but at the same time that doesn't mean that Anatol might not do him some actual harm in his deluded mental state. To me the man seems to definitely need psychiatric help and he is not getting it.
I found the idea of all of the men in tuxedos fighting funny, however. And this Bell woman might be great at what she does, but she's also even better at sowing seeds of doubt in Brian's head. Something tells me that could play a part coming up.
I will be looking forward to your next chapter, Bea! Thanks for posting this on here. :) Kim
Author's Response: Thanks Kim. I see your point concerning Anatol, I will have to develop him in a new chapter to explain better why Justin is not only not afraid of him, but has sympathy for him, even if he unquestionably has mental issues. They have some kind of history together. And yes the agent has set up something, and she knows it perfectly.
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