Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2016 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 4
I'm loving this story! I thought for a moment that the crazy man was Craig... ha, ha, ha...
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Hi Kathleen,
It is the kind of crazy things that Craig could have done, isn't it? But he would more likely have yelled "Pervert! Depraved! Sinner!". Such a caring father...
Thanks for the review
Bea
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2016 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 4
so i'm guessing they dance at the fundraiser thingy and then he gets the bat to the head from this crazy dude
Author's Response: Well, I don't want to give up too much, but, no, no bat to the head.
Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2016 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 4
Hi Bea. I just started reading this and you have quite a story going here : ) In the first chapter where Justin saw Brian standing in his window and was startled to see a naked man smoking and staring at him was good, I could just imagine that happening in my head. Brian was pretty much a complete turd to him at the end of the second chapter but I liked how Justin handled it, I think it made Brian see Justin for the mature young man that he is. Plus, I don’t think Brian is over reacting at all about the Anatol situation in the fourth chapter, that man seems to be a few sandwiches short of a picnic, if you know what I mean ; ) BTW, I agree with YumYumPM, I don’t see any character bashing going on here, everyone has problems in their relationships, even fictional characters. This is an interesting story and I’m looking forward to seeing where you take this : ) *Hugs* Janet
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I loved your expression "a few sandwhiches short of a picnic", it's very visual and made me laugh ! Is it a common expression or did you make it? Brian's reaction is one of my favorite side of Brian, the protective one. And while you're here...I can't wait for your update on Wyoming Skies, I love this story!
Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2016 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 4
Welllllllll, I gotta say, I certainly didn't see that coming. Interesting character this Anatol. You know what that name means right? "sunrise"? appropriate I think pairing with Justin's "Sunshine". hopefully he really is as harmless as Justin seems to think.
I like how open Brian was in this as well as his expalnations to Lindsey and Michael.
Was very glad to see this update this morning.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response: I had no idea! Thanks for telling me, it's really a funny coincidence!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2016 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 4
Anatol scared the heck out of me.
Author's Response: Thanks, I did good then!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2016 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 4
I disagree with Dorrit. I'm enjoying this fic. Not everyone has a happy ending and I don't see you bashing anyone. I just see Brian and Justin in a new light. Keep on keeping on.
Author's Response: Thanks for your support. No, not everyone can have a happy ending, and hanging up to a couple when love is gone is far worst than breaking up. That's a mistake that Brian and Justin would never make. They're both too brave and honest for that.
Reviewer: dorrit (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2016 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 4
I was hoping for a new approach due to Brian and Justin's age advancment. Instead it's just the same old bashing of characters who aren't Brian or Justin. I am tired of stories that destroy another couple's relationship in order to elevate Brian and Justin's romance. And in this case every body's partnership was deep sixed. If you really think Brian and Justin are all that, why not make them a better couple instead of eliminating every other romance on the show. It's also not very realistic that Mel and Linz, Ben and Michael and Ted and Blake ALL went on the skids. And doing this is like saying Brian and Justin don't stack up as an emotionally healthy couple when you have these other examples. It shows little faith in Brian and Justin if they can only be together if they are the only lovers around.
Author's Response: Well, I don't think there's such a thing as a better couple. Your couple works or it doesn't, it's not a competition where the couple that lasts longer wins. Mel and Linds didn't work for me, They both cheated on each other, Lynds was obviously bisexual, an issue they never really discussed. Michael and Ben: Michael's lack of personality is another issue, he loses his and copies his partner. When with David, he turns into this snotty person, when with Ben, he becomes the perfect middle class parner. Ted and Blake seemed to be settling for each other, I saw affection between 2 lonely and insecure persons, not love. So yes, in my world, they all go their separate ways.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2016 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 4
How dare Michael and Lindsay think they are going with Brian just because they got an invitation. I hope Ben got one too. Brian's totally happy that Justin will be accompaning him. Now if he can just keep the crazy guy away, he'll be even happier.
Author's Response: Nope, sorry, at this point, Brian is a very loyal friend to Michael, so no invitation for Ben. But yeah, Michael and Lyndsay don't really have a sense of boundary where Brian is concerned, that will have to change.
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2016 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 4
Thank you for the quick update! I'm still enjoying this immensely, and can't wait for the next chapter :)
And just a question. Do you speak French? If so, I will leave my reviews in French if it's okay with you. Anyway, really loving this story, thank you!
Author's Response: Oui! Je suis française donc aucun souci, au contraire c'est trés agréable d'écrire en français après beacoup d'anglais! Et merci beaucoup pour ce gentil commentaire, ça me fait trés plaisir.
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