Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2016 02:28 PM · On: Chapter two: Justin
Loved it!
Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2016 10:45 PM · On: Chapter two: Justin
Oh poor Justin...Trying so hard to be with his soulmate. Why does Brian have to be so stubborn? Ugh!
Author's Response: Yes, Brian has always been so stubborn! I have a feeling he'd behave like this in canon too, if they had the names written on their wrists. Brian is always afraid of being happy.
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2016 05:15 PM · On: Chapter two: Justin
And now, we have Justin. Again, what can I say? I love him here and I'm still enjoying so much the passing of years and his evolution.
Author's Response: Thanks again, Alois! :) Writing from Justin's POV was so much fun, even though I felt sad at times, considering Brian's tendency to push people away.
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2016 03:57 AM · On: Chapter two: Justin
You can fight against the tide for only so long before finally giving in. Its tiring and wears you out. Go to someone else Justin, recharge and come back ready to fight for your man. He'll be waiting.
Author's Response: I completely agree :) Brian could fight before, when he still had no idea how happy he could be, but not now, when he experienced how amazing being with Justin is. I believe Justin loves Brian - loved him always in all universes, canon included, even in time he was with Ethan. If Brian was willing to give in just a little bit, they'd never break up. But on the other hand, this way they both grew up and realized how much they mean to each other.
Thank you again! I hope you'll like the next chapter.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2016 01:16 PM · On: Chapter two: Justin
Does Brian come to his senses?
Author's Response: Of course :) Brian could never be without Justin once he realized what it's like to be with him. At least I firmly believe in it :)
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2016 09:53 AM · On: Chapter two: Justin
Just read both chapters. Wowww ... just wowww ... beautiful written. Need another chapter ASAP.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Hi, Marny, thank you so much! I'm happy you liked the story - I wasn't going to write it, but I just couldn't resist, I love the idea of soulmates. I hope you'll enjoy the conclusion!
Reviewer: TheGirlNoOneKnows5 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2016 07:51 AM · On: Chapter two: Justin
Oh wow, what a moving chapter!
Brian is probably going crazy in secret over his blond's name. Poor Justin.
Love this story :)
xoxo
Author's Response: Hi, Cait! Thank you, your comments mean a lot to me. You are right, Brian being Brian is of course worried about the name on Justin's wrist, but he'd never show it directly. He won't have to worry soon, though :) Everything will be dealt with.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2016 05:48 AM · On: Chapter two: Justin
I was so hoping this would be updated to day <3 <3 <3
Author's Response: Hi there! I'm sorry for not updating earlier. I finished the final chapter yesterday but I got delayed, and then I wanted to change a few things. Now it's completely ready :)
Reviewer: Frances (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2016 10:47 PM · On: Chapter two: Justin
Yep. I'm hooked. Awaiting the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!:) The next chapter is finished, I'll post it soon. I hope you'll like it!
Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2016 04:01 PM · On: Chapter two: Justin
O.........M...............G!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was such an extreme amount of emotions all in one chapter. Jimminy Crickets! So sweet and touching to start off with...developing into something hopeful...then pow...devestation right to the heart.
OK..so now there needs to be a suitable amount of angst...Michael is obviously going to be thrilled to no end. (I sure and hell hope he meets Ben soon) Then Brian realizes his loss and high tails it to get Justin back and re-evaluates his whole idea of soulmates.
So, I know I told you I loved the first chapter....dear lordy...this one was spectacular! I love being taken on an emotional journey when I read. I think I took a world wide trip here.
I seriously can't wait for the next chapter.
cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response: Hi, Elaine, thank you so much for your another amazing, so emotional comment! I read it several times, it just made my day. Angst is my everything, I can't write in any other genre. The next chapter is lighter, however :) And you're right, Michael will throw a fit, but since the story is short, everything will be resolved pretty quickly. His Ben is coming finally.
You are also right in thinking that Brian will be the one who'll make the first move. I love when Brian hurts Justin and then has to win him back, so I decided to write it like this :) Actually, I think Brian got a little sappy in the third chapter, but I couldn't write it any other way for some reason. Anyway, I hope you'll enjoy the final part! And thank you again for your words, they are much appreciated.
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